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Old 09-22-09, 02:46 AM   #1
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new song i just did...just lookin for feed back


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Old 09-22-09, 11:02 AM   #2
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Listening: shitty hook, you have no emotion , its annoying, good beat, beat is not bad, is it me or Eminem is your biggest influence? just saying, anyway keep droping,

Hook is really bad
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Old 09-22-09, 11:58 AM   #3
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lol, yeah the hook was made on the fly...

no, why do you ask Eminem?
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Old 09-22-09, 12:05 PM   #4
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Cuz it sounds like something he would do, but better, you just need more emotions and becareful with the flow, you messed up some places but the rest was chill
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Cuz it sounds like something he would do, but better, you just need more emotions and becareful with the flow, you messed up some places but the rest was chill



Cool, i aprreicate your feedback.
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Old 09-24-09, 11:13 AM   #6
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lol what? ?
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Old 09-24-09, 03:13 PM   #8
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I thought we were naming countries in here...

...what it's my fault i don't read threads properly???
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