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Kinesthesia

A perpetual movementof music causes mass confusion/
Thats why im creative and innovative with movement/
to introduce hits anylized like blueprints/
an architec with a pen and paper with thoughts so D'luzion/
The sensation to envision words full of collision/
Without motion, just to spill th explicit /
I stay true to what i believe, Kinesthesia to music/
While others emulate hip-hop acting so stupid/
Sadated mc's laugh at the music the ruined/
thats wht they gaze at a sea of mc's to flow so fluid/
But im influenced of a dream that seems untouchable/
But im an insomniac so that dream is undestructable/
But sadly i get pulled by reality/
to have to see what the world has to be/
so what happening is this an eternal mist/
Are we blistfully unaware and cant react to this/
Are we an anistheticx society and act so sublime/
And act so suprised by rhymes that try to deprive/
Ways that are hazed to the traditional/
ignorant mentalities beyond the superficial/
And its official this pencil acts like a pistol/
it penetrates and scars your soul as a metaphorical missille/
and hits you and leaves you with a conciousness/
what once was minds now turns into garbage/

pretty good i guess
simple rhymes
this doesnt really stand out from alot of the people on here
elevate

and undestructable isnt a word
peace

thx for the feedback, and what i meant to say was indestructable,

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