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01-18-03, 12:50 PM
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Sinful Ink presents.. [Shades of Gray]
IP: ED9A 37F7
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Feedback The pain hides..trapped inside an insane mind Ain't my turn..gettin razor burn cross my neck in a straight line Would you hate life..as much as I do if your fate died? With 7 lucky pills in my palm..already ate 9 Will I stumble or stand once I uncover this plan? Paintin the prettiest picture with the ugliest hand My emotions crumbled and ran..you lovin this man? As much chance as me being smothered in fans What will I gain in cells? Where the pain is felt? Losing love..oozing blood so I can paint this hell Or I can be fake and pale..mainstream til my brain is swelled You just build me up..so I can hang myself Chasin a maze..never tracing the page to amazing or great Imagine waking up everyday to the face that you hate I'm facing my fate..say grace as I'm spraying in craze My life is gone..as I write this song and fade away... ...........to shades of gray.. Last edited by NuclearConcepts : 01-18-03 at 01:03 PM. |
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01-18-03, 01:24 PM
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IP: 5153 3B92
DIS WAZ RAW,DA WORDPLAY WAZ OFF DA HOOK,ERYTHANG FLOWED PERFECTLY,HOTT SHIT PLAYA
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01-18-03, 09:26 PM
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IP: ED9A 37F7
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01-18-03, 10:42 PM
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IP: D684 DDC7
nice piece. this is the kind of stuff i look for here. raw emotion spit straight out the mind and on to the paper. youre on your way
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01-19-03, 10:46 AM
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IP: EDE1 A1AF
Yo dis was one of da hottest pieces i've seen on Rb in da open mic I was feelin it all da way i'd really like to do a collab wit u holla back on dat dawg ~1~
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