"flows reverse metaphorical-pride, with retorical rhymes
historical pose disenrobes times' quoteable lines
amateur lyricists disengage, from clavicle instruments dat strip brains
spit flames, phospherous ignites thru proposterous membranes"

"pen begins, to dismember audible vessels, release concious pencils
with horizontal movement drawin pictures fluent with stilettos
as rips classicly clever, massively sever appendages thru pressed nodes
as i impress foes, eyes widen within merciless rhymes glidin, detestin codes"

"infinite lyrics encode-n-patterns die, rechargeable alkaline
battery powered-n-derived sound thru vibes, verbal tyrant
thermal heat discloses portions of ur orfice, closely spoken within wise things
escape death, n remain a threat to life with respect to knives
as ginsu's rip thru facial tissue counterclockwise"

Your first multis had dis whole rhyme goin to da end dis ish was hotter den july u got da multi's style i like u go holla at my crew's forum called U.N.O. aight i'll help u get in u got skillz dunny U can only get better ~1~

thanx fa da reply thun...i'll do dat

Well i can tell you got skill!
nice wordplay and vocab or whatever.
a lil bit too nice i don't like
those Dictionary ass rappers
you need too make your shit a lil bit more
understandable ..but you got skill
ONe

understandable? lolz sorry girl i dont lower my skill for on1-n-whuts funny is dat i aint even try hard on that key...u shouldnt have said that cause now i think your just an uneducated chick nah'mean?? but its cool n dont take this out on me by trying to insinuate a battle 2 shutup me up or nething cuz if u thought my flimsy key was skills u'll get annhialated if i actually tried...HAHAHAHAHHAHAHHA...muahz! but i still luv u....peace

my multis are doper but this was koo

ur multies are doper huh??...ummmm ok?

yea this was coo man...i like the vocab yo, shits ill...ill be sure to peep something you really try on since you say this was nothing! nice shit!

1

peep my ish"the brains nameless name"

^^mos definitely bro

Nice spit for-sure, I enjoy tha read playah. You got good talent, multis' on-point, flow off-tha-hook, catchy stayle dawgie, ya spit all straight. U.N.O. lookin' out for ya'
keep doin ya

OuTtIe