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02-12-03, 04:16 PM | #1 | ||||||
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I borrowed a few lines. But peep dis, and tell me what ya think.
Title (Undecided) (Verse 1) Visions of ending my life caused by anger and depession// Latest conversations end in an interogation session// anger cause by agression, parents yellin tryin to get out a confession// Dreaming of happiness while drowning in sorrow// Wanting today to end, yet, not wanting tomorrow// Tired of runnin, livin on the outside while dyin within// Begging for it not to happen, but it's happenin again// Body feels with adrenalin, and the hate words just start flowin again// without thinkin// wonderin if these fights are cause by emotion or to much drinkin// Seems like im trapped in a maze, tryin to find a way out, but keep runnin into dead ends or wrong wayz// the pressure is amounting, the pain seeps outta my eyes// I'm tired of this world, of the pain, depression, and vile lies// (Hook 1) What are these dayz but of fast lanes and bright lights// like your driven to drink and drive hopin you clip a street light// Goin 120mph the wind seems to blow through your hair as if your not there.// So lonely inside your reflection shows you dont care// Your favorite songs playz and the pain seems to creep away// But then it changes and you flip wishin it would play all day// (Temporary Line) (Verse 2) I try my best to make yall happy, I try my hardest to help yall understand// but the more I try the less it works, a counteraction to whats planned// It seems to me that what I do, just isn't good enough for yall anymore// The more I have the more I lose, like tryin to get in through a closed door// Tired of havin to pick myself up off the floor// I'd should run away cause it would make it easier to live// But Im tired of being the only one who gives// Cant put up with no more bitchin// wish I could go around cuttin toungs cause there would be no more yellin snitchen,screamin get the fuck out my kitchen// I like to leave everything unnoticed because it makes now seem okay// place my problems in a stack in my closet put them away// (Hook2) What are these dayz but of fast lanes and bright lights// like your driven to drink and drive hopin you clip a street light// Goin 120mph the wind seems to blow through your hair as if your not there.// So lonely inside your reflection shows you dont care// Your favorite songs playz and the pain seems to creep away// But then it changes and you flip wishin it would play all day// (Temporary Line) (Verse 3) Try and put my past behind me but it never leaves completely// Run but it follows like Jason-X, I cant get it away from me// I look on these past years and all I can remember is all the tears cried// Feelin alone no one to run to, loved ones died// |
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02-12-03, 04:18 PM | #2 | ||||||
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This song i wrote was "Inspired by a poem I read in "poetic Scriptures" if ya recognize this as your own. Hit Me Up so i can send ya the Audio and tell me what ya think.
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