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Old 02-12-03, 04:16 PM   #1
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I borrowed a few lines. But peep dis, and tell me what ya think.

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(Verse 1)

Visions of ending my life caused by anger and depession//
Latest conversations end in an interogation session//
anger cause by agression, parents yellin tryin to get out a confession//
Dreaming of happiness while drowning in sorrow//
Wanting today to end, yet, not wanting tomorrow//
Tired of runnin, livin on the outside while dyin within//
Begging for it not to happen, but it's happenin again//
Body feels with adrenalin, and the hate words just start flowin again//
without thinkin//
wonderin if these fights are cause by emotion or to much drinkin//
Seems like im trapped in a maze, tryin to find a way out, but keep runnin
into dead ends or wrong wayz//
the pressure is amounting, the pain seeps outta my eyes//
I'm tired of this world, of the pain, depression, and vile lies//

(Hook 1)

What are these dayz but of fast lanes and bright lights//
like your driven to drink and drive hopin you clip a street light//
Goin 120mph the wind seems to blow through your hair as if your not there.//
So lonely inside your reflection shows you dont care//
Your favorite songs playz and the pain seems to creep away//
But then it changes and you flip wishin it would play all day// (Temporary Line)

(Verse 2)
I try my best to make yall happy, I try my hardest to help yall understand//
but the more I try the less it works, a counteraction to whats planned//
It seems to me that what I do, just isn't good enough for yall anymore//
The more I have the more I lose, like tryin to get in through a closed door//
Tired of havin to pick myself up off the floor//
I'd should run away cause it would make it easier to live//
But Im tired of being the only one who gives//
Cant put up with no more bitchin//
wish I could go around cuttin toungs cause there would be no more yellin
snitchen,screamin get the fuck out my kitchen//
I like to leave everything unnoticed because it makes now seem okay//
place my problems in a stack in my closet put them away//

(Hook2)

What are these dayz but of fast lanes and bright lights//
like your driven to drink and drive hopin you clip a street light//
Goin 120mph the wind seems to blow through your hair as if your not there.//
So lonely inside your reflection shows you dont care//
Your favorite songs playz and the pain seems to creep away//
But then it changes and you flip wishin it would play all day// (Temporary Line)

(Verse 3)

Try and put my past behind me but it never leaves completely//
Run but it follows like Jason-X, I cant get it away from me//
I look on these past years and all I can remember is all the tears cried//
Feelin alone no one to run to, loved ones died//
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Old 02-12-03, 04:18 PM   #2
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This song i wrote was "Inspired by a poem I read in "poetic Scriptures" if ya recognize this as your own. Hit Me Up so i can send ya the Audio and tell me what ya think.
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