aight u said spit first i will spit...


masterful flow minimum articulation//
you can't seem educated like a down syndrome conversation//
ya flow watered down like beer condensation//
im a young cat that's hot diaper dandy like dick vitale commentatin//
me garbage? ignorant stipulation//
you nice? bad critical imitation//
new rhymes? lyrical innvovation//
something unheard of by the likes of you//
u like to bumb scissors wit dudes something that only dikes'll do//
your garbage the only time you seem hot//
is when u got ocean front property and the sun's lost//
not likely that you'll ever be tight//
ask miss cleo, she'll ask rhetorical questions like "your whack right?"//
no answers exactly waht i thought//
don't even drop a rhyme just go back to your block//(basketball low post)
don't cross the key don't wait for release//(on the freethrows)
you being hot is like saying method man don't smoke trees

it'll be up tonight........

can this be considered a no show... being that he hasn't shown... ? can i count this as my win...?

I dont think u could but he wont top that that was a hot verse

cho or who ever can uvote on my battle

no show if not posted by 12

ayo ma fault dogg.....Busy in shit........But ay ima do diss open mic den i'm jump to diss battle

put down ya websters kidd ya verse hold weight like a fish tank on 3 toothpick's,Wit a Knife and Kodak faggot you Still coulden't sharpen ya Image!!!/
Dashskit don't care if you a young cat, I serve you Anyway like Lack of chicken in a Chinese Resterant/
and tha chances of you spittin hot Like Mj wit a nigga nose waking up back black doin tha moonwalk!!/
haha................../
You recycle Ya Bittins more den ya Spit 1 Liners, Rubbing Dem Chop STICKS Tha Closest you getting ta Being associated with fire/
you pack bullshit when you spit like Menure Factory's,
woulden't Get felt If you wrote ya verse in Brail and handed it to Blind Student's/
ya punch's Scrapped the surface but ain't sinking in like Dike's Humpping,I have you rapping in Echo's jus ta say ya rhymes are DEscent/
tie you to a pick-up truck and drive 90 miles an hour till ya body parts start ta scatter,fumbling a burning bible tha only time you'll ever drop hot knowldege/................

fuck iT.............................

A'ight. I'll vote on this one. You can deny my vote since I'm a newbie, like both of you. I expect most will be about as hyped to drop comment on this battle as Dashskit was to be part of it: Not very.

CS had a solid start.

masterful flow minimum articulation//
you can't seem educated like a down syndrome conversation//
ya flow watered down like beer condensation//
im a young cat that's hot diaper dandy like dick vitale commentatin//
me garbage? ignorant stipulation//
you nice? bad critical imitation//
new rhymes? lyrical innvovation//

Flow gets hurt by inequality in length especially bar 4.
But it snapped, I like Q&A.
But, sometimes shit doesn't make sense to me.
What the hell is doing minimal articulation?
Why does Dashskit have ocean front property?
And why would the sun lost make him seem hot?
Maybe I'm slow with it, but you lost somebody there.
Why's Ms. Cleo's question "rhetorical"?...
You finished with something good, and that helps.
Although I just though of:
Yao Ming ain't Chinese (tightens, keeps up with the b-ball)
Sonny Bono don't hit trees

But, you probably hate me anyways, so I won't suggest lines.
There is some repetition I'd rather not see.
Hot and garbage. Double time.

Hey. Hot Garbage...

D@ShSkiT!

Just playing, but here I go.

There's a, ah, lack of rhyming.
The wordage on your first/second bar, whatever you block it off as (since there's not much rhyming it's hard to tell!), is not bad.
It doesn't flow, but it makes sense.

Dashskit don't care if you a young cat, I serve you Anyway like Lack of chicken in a Chinese Resterant/

What the hell is this about lacking chicken?...

and tha chances of you spittin hot Like Mj wit a nigga nose waking up back black doin tha moonwalk!!/

Are you pronouncing walk --> wack?
Otherwise why not: like MJ waking up back black wit a nigga nose doing tha moonwalk, on tippy-toes.

You recycle Ya Bittins more den ya Spit 1 Liners, Rubbing Dem Chop STICKS Tha Closest you getting ta Being associated with fire/

Probably your best line. Rhymed. But rip fucking "associated" out of there. Mucks up the whole GD thing.

And we know what Brail is, you don't have to tell us about the blind students. If it was there for flow, cool. But we know damn well it wasn't part of a rhyme scheme.

"ain't sinking in like Dike's Humpping"
That shit made me laugh. Good line.

Last line was a composed thought. But lyrically influent.

"fuck iT............................."

Cool!

So, I thought Dashskit had some clever word...play?
But you need to play with words a lot more than you do.
Make them rhyme and match in time.
Take it easy... Compose some freestyles when you're less "angry" and make sure your shit rhymes:
And you will get better.

But for now, ChoPs-Sticks will have to get my vote.
Keep on keepin' on yall.
Damn.

Dats stright.......You ain't Get tha Chinese Joke?.....haha.....

aite chopsticks got this.....

dashkit....his shit aint ryhme too well wich threw me off n shit....he had sum nice punches n sum funny 1's der too...but chopsticks edged him out cuz his flowed better

For those dat don't Kno how too read a different Flow.......................you read till you get to a coma,(PAUSE)then read again till you get too (This)(/).........haha...Uppin fo sum real Votes........I ain't 1 ta bitch but cum on..............

ay dogg how you goin post a verse.........and den after dat critic first vote go back and edit ya verse?..........DOn't even Start ta Bitch Cuz I got Proof Muh-fucka....Tha weed let you notice shit nigga..............you ain't slick...haha..........

LooK:
(1)(VOTER Comment)
Why's Ms. Cleo's question "rhetorical"?...

(new OUTCOME)
ask miss cleo, she'll ask rhetorical questions like "your whack right?"//

(2)(VOTER Comment)
Yao Ming ain't Chinese (tightens, keeps up with the b-ball)

(new OUTCOME)
don't even drop a rhyme just go back to your block//(basketball low post)

(3)(VOTER Comment)
Sonny Bono don't hit trees

(new OUTCOME)
you being hot is like saying method man don't smoke trees



Whoop!!!.....there it iz muh-fucka in a bag of peanutz......................UppIn!!!!.........hah a.........I think it's safe ta say you lost homie...