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Old 02-18-03, 02:16 PM   #1
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3 Letta Scripture

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YALL CANT SEE DAT B.O.L,SHIT WE LEAVE DEEZ...............

Bitches bewildered,b.o.l.'n on beavis'n'buttheads,beaches burnt bloody red,buildins,banished,bewrae banshees' bangin bass,ba~6 (basics) breakin grace,butchers pin~pointin bimbos,im by~yo~side (biocide) bustin by~yo~logical (biological) windows,bittersweet blakk~outs,bakks~out,imma be~light (blight),n call it a night,bombins blur boarders,blanked baltimore an,boule~vards~bound~in,body~parts~found~in,bottom ~less~foun~tains,blood boilin,
.O.pposin???,options opted to open,closed~caskets,orbit obnoxious orphans,objects,w/ obedient ordersbliterate ya head~quarters,my ordnance=out~stand ya orgins,out~burtsin out~words (outwards),our~search in,organized O.G.'s,oragins hold me,
Lossers laid lateral,lords left w/ lap~tops,launched on by ill~Liderit cannibals,leavein lakes laced w/ fakes embracin fates liberation,legends leadin the learners,lendin life~times of earnins,loadin my furnace,leisurely levelin burdens.

DIS PIECE REPPIN FOR MY B.O.L'n CLIKK,MY BASICKS/BA~6/BASICS FAMILIA,MILWAUKEE NIGGAZ TEARIN IT UP ONCE AGAIN
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Old 02-18-03, 08:21 PM   #2
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ok

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nice concept.....but i thought the flow was off in some places....and due to the subject i think you neglected some sense for the overall effect of your rhyme scheme....but creative to say the least
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Old 02-18-03, 11:50 PM   #3
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thanx,good point,it waz a bit hard tryna use only 1 letta 4 each set,but it came out aiight.....................upppppppppin
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