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02-19-03, 10:57 PM
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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"same world.... but it's mine so f**k off"-- sick verse, check it...
IP: 54EC 2721
I'm livin' in the same world as you.//
that doesn't mean I gotta like you too.// hate is all I feel for my fellow man.// pulled the gauge out once but the fellow ran.// I followed him, made him swallow 10.// down his throat, tips was hollowed out.// blew off both his tonsils, left a crater where his stomach should be.// who once was one livin now restin in peace.// forget it, please, just stop try'n,// you'll never be anything close to what I am.// just keep denying it, everything's totally wack about you.// I'm about to, throw a little twist into the mix.// I don't, give a fuck, about anyone, except for number 1.// me, I cock back and pull to all who try and get close.// punch faces until they smile nuthin' but black holes.// slap hoes for steppin' outta line.// even if they do what I tell 'em, I still back hand 'em,.// that's just who I am, cripplin' people at random.// http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=31762 http://http://rapbattles.com/forum/...&threadid=31837 |
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02-20-03, 09:24 AM
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: A175 060F
c'mon people, uppin for some intelligent feedback..
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02-21-03, 06:48 PM
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IP: 872B E5DF
i dont know, im not going to tell you to change your style but im not feeling the whole killer gangster type shit. its ok if it was on a CD or something but on the net its just wack.
now go reply to my quick verse, dont sleep and you wont get slept on. |
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02-21-03, 07:11 PM
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"My 2 Cents..."
IP: 4577 CD9A
This was an aight drop...not the most skilled I've seen in my day...but a little work, and you'll do just fine.
The bar layout isn't the easiest to follow, thus..the flow wasn't that great...try to make all of your bars pretty much the same length..no more than 16 syllables, no less than 13...and your flow should stay constant... Just some help... Nice drop tho... P.E.A.C.E. |
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02-21-03, 11:14 PM
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IP: D60A 453D
yo, do any of you fucking people even know how to rap... "its ok if it was on a CD or something but on the net its just wack...." dumb fuck... it is recorded, it is performed.... I'm not some fucking computer geek who wants to be a net thug, I'm postin' my shit for the people who don't know when the next hot game of the week is coming out down to the second..... I HAVE A REAL LIFE, and most of the shit I say in a rhyme is true.. never actually killed, but I've been shot, I've shot someone, and I've been to jail... closest you faggits come is getting killed playing starcraft online.. pussys..... Now that I got over that, Apostle thanks for advice, again however, you are not hearing it, you're reading it, flows can be very complex as to the way the words are pronounced so unless I was going to spell every word phonetically you really have to use your imagination.... EZ
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