Yo...

10-20 bars
first to 5, 3-0 KO
No crew, hate, Unexplained votes
ill spit first tomorrow...

heres my links:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=31638

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=31784

arite kid here i go:

Look at this kid man, grenade avatar and all/
14 years old freestylin, thinkin hes made to ball//
Ill take that 'nade you possess and toss it straight for ya chest/
detonated lyrics leave sentence fragments embedded in your flesh//
Im serious man ill vanquish you like that Aston Martin/
When i fuckin arrive on the scene your ass departin'//
Kid u couldnt rip a larynx if u had a Harvard degree in medicine/
You still livin with your parents; when they decree, you bend//
the only way youd be considered hot is if you stand where i just was/
you got no flame, you flickered, no bang, your words are just duds//
im swingin ill leave you feelin dummy with a swole tooth/
i jacked the RIppa, i been stealin his money like a toll booth//
Grading you technically on your rhyming skills, you get flunked man/
its degrading for you, cuz essentially you just got killed...... by a drunk man//



sorry i took so long to post, i had class n shit....

wtf.... how come this aint on the top now...

Uppin..... hopefully

uppin for this newb