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02-25-03, 08:56 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Pretty dope rhyme
IP: 5797 CEB5
never knew the meaning of it all
till that one fateful fall when i lost it all Seems hard to explain, maybe it's Jus the pain My search for fame turned up empty handed Not like i'd planned to have it Just woulda been nice to handel it I can't stand it, it's like i'm stuck in the same rut What the fuck can't seem to find the luck Ahhhh shucks Zero looks like you live up you 2 your name You got nothing but a book of lyrics But nobody wants ta hear it I feel it, the anger rising up my patients, wears thin, but i just sit hear and bite my lip Like why throw a fit, won't make me rich Time to cause some shit, let my Anger do the talking, either that or i'm walking out on this game, a rage that just can't be tamed Infamous temper that always seems to show it's face Chase my dream but i can't keep up Swept away by all the other rappers, who seem to rise up it's like what the fuck, i can rap circles round all those fucks They say hold on to hope, but theres nothing to grasp c'mon Shorty... gotta take a chance, lifes gotta Deal you a good hand but fates got his own plans I'm just a prisoner of circumstance |
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02-26-03, 08:22 AM | #2 | ||||||
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.Responding.
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What's up rookie? Your spit was pretty nice. At some points, the rhyme lost it's way, but then you jumped back in with some nice shit. Keep workin' on it, and you'll get there.
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