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Old 02-25-03, 08:56 PM   #1
Zero0ne
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Pretty dope rhyme

IP: 5797 CEB5

never knew the meaning of it all
till that one fateful fall when i lost it all
Seems hard to explain, maybe it's Jus the pain
My search for fame turned up empty handed
Not like i'd planned to have it
Just woulda been nice to handel it
I can't stand it, it's like i'm stuck in the same rut
What the fuck can't seem to find the luck
Ahhhh shucks Zero looks like you live up you 2 your name
You got nothing but a book of lyrics
But nobody wants ta hear it
I feel it, the anger rising up
my patients, wears thin, but i just sit hear and bite my lip
Like why throw a fit, won't make me rich
Time to cause some shit, let my
Anger do the talking, either that or i'm walking
out on this game, a rage that just can't be tamed
Infamous temper that always seems to show it's face
Chase my dream but i can't keep up
Swept away by all the other rappers, who seem to rise up
it's like what the fuck, i can rap circles round all those fucks
They say hold on to hope, but theres nothing to grasp
c'mon Shorty... gotta take a chance, lifes gotta
Deal you a good hand
but fates got his own plans
I'm just a prisoner of circumstance
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Old 02-26-03, 08:22 AM   #2
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What's up rookie? Your spit was pretty nice. At some points, the rhyme lost it's way, but then you jumped back in with some nice shit. Keep workin' on it, and you'll get there.
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