i've been gone for a while
but i'm back hotter than ever
spittn mad flows
bringn metaphors sharper than cheddar
i used to be wack
and not even think twice
now i know i'm wack
but imma still roll the dice
i dont' care what ya'll think
i'll spit no matter what u say
leadn catz to Christ
is why I live the day to day
i'm prayn for you all
prayn that you'll see the light
cause right now
ya'll lost in the dark of night

1st - combine your bars together... where the word that rhymes is on the end... and by the way not all of us is lost in the dark of night... and to crit this... improve everything... vocab, flow, content and make a storyline.


pz