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Old 02-26-03, 06:25 PM   #1
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Dream'n.......

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Is this love or lust, I know it's more than a crush...
Fuck the lust, I hope it's love cuz you got me feel'n like if it's a rush...
When you give me that hug, when you rubb'n ya hand down my lugz...
When I first saw you in the club, I couldn't believe my eyes...
Your beautiful face wit your incredablie thighs, jus give me a try, baby you fine...
Let's go to my crib and sip on the wine, want'n you mine, is the only thing on my mind...
You on my side, is more than a dream, it's more than it seems...
Combination like cookies and cream, it'll be more than a team...
It'll only be a force sent from heaven, my heart had tentions that went to affection...
The weapon that struct me the best is the way you cared...
Women couldn't compare to the way you shared...
Your feel'ns with me and i thought you was rare...
Strok'n your hair as I watch your beauty jus flare...
Me and you is a pair, and I wanna cherish it...
We'll marriage and wed, as soon as i take you to paris in bed...
All I want is you and noth'n else, life would be so well...
It's a story to tell but who would believe I fell in love with a an-gel...
All I want to do is take you on a ride, hold your body tight...
Make you feel right, in every situation till you say it with pride...
Ask yourself why not, and then let me know...
As I gaze upon your beauty, I think to myself, never have I seen an angel fly so low...
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Old 02-27-03, 01:13 AM   #2
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That flowed feally well, i caught its rhythmn the first time through. props
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Old 02-27-03, 11:48 PM   #3
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I've walked the tightrope of the deadly sin of lust enough to know it when I see it. It's lust.

Otherwise, this a nice flowing poem. It was conjectured in a way to display the things that you be really feeling inside. Keep dropping.

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