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Old 02-25-03, 04:36 PM   #1
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praying for blasphemy.....[ill shit]

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[Fundamental]

Hoping dreamin and praying for blashpemy..dreams of death in a casket pls..
many may disagree but religion to me is nuthin but the contradictions of beliefs...
that leaves debris and untruthfullness priests not bein true to the kids...
puttin in there bids for forbidden temptaion preaching and fillin there lids...
with lies and fake laws to abide by..dividing nations..to spread there words worldwide...
it hurts inside to watch these lies..not to follow for if i do there is no tommorrow..
since ive seen all the sorrow of all the followers that follow...
the biblical scriptures of absurd words that seem to be preffered by the herd...
and takin in as a way of life from the states all the way into a thirdworld...
somethign to turn to...step away from the content of the world...
and read scriptures that have been reworded to detor the thoughts of those that differ...
and refuse to listen to written words that are supposed to explain y god made earth...
made man..werentt people and life suppose to projected hand and hand..
instead of strands of beliefs and everyones differances of opinion...
everyone with there own dominions..claimin there so called real religions...
im jus gonna fold and keep winnin no need to keep on listining...
or believing the bullshit a name passed on although ive had my christining...
listening and reading keep my eyes glistening ..time to realize open ya eyes and look...
ive always been perplexed at y sometimes the bible is stated upon as the "good" book?..


[DeathToll]

As I look for the guiding light all I see is candles flicker
Funeral’s drastic vigour, heavens a large place but a caskets bigger
Attentive ignorance, acknowledge sacred readings
Preaching about love while hatred’s breeding, metaphors in place of meaning
Tell stories found in the great book of contradictions and lies
Seeing those turning to God for help paints pictures of time
Priests having affairs while degrading sex before marriage
Pulled by horses, touring heavens tormented souls, hells next for the carriage
Another life on the side, I’ll be a murderer if I practice an eye for an eye
Never sin, never pray, will God cry when I die?
Biblically born and raised hence the biblical name
Came into this world standing for the joys of God, now I’m sitting through pain
Imprison my brain…why follow the commandments of others?
Gods name in vein felt the hand of my mother
Tell me how to live my life, the rights and wrongs the do’s and don’ts
Thou shall not commit adultery…the priest’s wife told me to choose myself
Read between Bible lines and view the hidden pictures
Always talk of saving the poor while the preacher sits in riches
I fail to think, so what if Mary’s a virgin, why are you hailing it?
Wear a cross around my neck…and have my freedom nailed to it
I’ll believe in the lord when the worlds rid of agony and torture
Dam religion…at least blasphemy’s important
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Old 02-26-03, 02:52 AM   #2
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uppin above wackness
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Old 02-26-03, 07:45 PM   #3
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i liked everythign i have read of yours, this was nice, wont bother with trying to give yo tips cause your better then me, but just letting you know i liked it.
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Old 02-27-03, 09:19 AM   #4
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This was dope.. nice rhyme scheme... good use of volcabulary and nice imagery.... all in all... nice.... peace
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Old 02-27-03, 02:45 PM   #5
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thanks for replies so far...more would be good though
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Old 02-27-03, 02:59 PM   #6
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dat shit was nice, good rhymes and structure. stayed focused, it was a nice peice
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Old 02-27-03, 03:07 PM   #7
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how do u do this....come wit shit thats hot everytime u spit.I envy yo ass.this was wack..........just hatin

This was good i didnt feel the Fundamental part that much secnd verse superbb to da point.

"Preaching about love while hatred’s breeding, metaphors in place of meaning................ "
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Old 02-27-03, 03:14 PM   #8
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yo dat was hot im gonna keep looking out for yo shit i see what i gotta work towards- maybe in a few year or somethin- peace
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Old 02-28-03, 02:19 PM   #9
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uppin my fam's shit
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