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02-24-03, 03:55 PM
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"Gateway To Hades"
IP: 5153 3B92
Once again some deep shit, for those who wake up....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Verse One: Fixing my plot, as me and Hell sit across from each other; The smell of a revolution made the oxygen smothere; Some call it genuis, others call it blinded perception; But I'll render his soul hepless with a knife as a weapon;* Descreatly rebellin, consiquences of my devious dwelling; This sinister plan is the product of the demons i’ve held in; Leaving this hellish place, has me seemingly helpless; "Believe me he'll parish!" Is what i walked out screaming & yelling;* Anxious for freedom, I had a thought to pain his cerebrum; Have him caged, and him bleedin is the faith I believe in; Leave his departed soul and spirit stained from the beatings; I fear not, even though I'm told it's dangerous: leaving;* With the grimmest expression, malitia, and a dim lit perception; My cynical presence made them raise guns, but I grin at the weapons; Through a minute’s reflection I can see his timid complexion; I see a man walking in my direction, it's him what a blessing;* Hook Verse Two: Satanic & evil....his demise expands my cerebral; I'm manic & lethal, plus my fuckin plan is deceitful; I'm the phantom, the eagle sent here to dismantle the people; My guards run in with uzi's drawn: He's panicking, feeble;* I walk up to the reigning beast; I think I'll start w/ dissection; Gut his stomach wide open, and then char his intestines; I was as my plan unfolds it's been cautiously forming; My troops win hands down, it was flawless and morbid;* The blossoming orchids of love had me nauseous & torn in; The gut, I now crave death, but I'm watching in boredom; Funny though, cause he had his minions awkwardly sorted; He should've known better, he should've been watching his fortress;* Since 3 o’clock in the morning, I've had it down to a science; I love this shit, I can't believe I used to forwn at the violence; The roars of Heaven's Armed Forces drowned out the silence No more "Mr. NiceGuy"...I'm acting out of defiance;* The laws remain the same, I must desease all the blasphemous; Supidity; He's acted in. I had a reason to flatten Sin; I let death linger in the breeze, Rest in Peace to the Shadowed men; And Rest in Peace Lucifer, my name's Jesus of Nazareth;* No hook yet, still debating on how to approach it.... P.E.A.C.E. P.S. I'd drop links to my replies, but I constantly reply to Open Mics.... |
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02-24-03, 04:18 PM
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IP: 58BE 3947
i liked it i thought it was deep and i loved your vocab.
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02-24-03, 08:49 PM
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"Thank You..."
IP: 4577 CD9A
Thank you...I appreciate possitive feedback...
To The Sky... P.E.A.C.E. |
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02-24-03, 09:45 PM
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IP: B41F E202
I like it the lyrics are very hot
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02-25-03, 12:56 PM
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IP: 5153 3B92
nice vocab, wordplay, ect. feelin this from begining to end. nice drop.peep my ish. holla
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02-25-03, 07:45 PM
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"Thank You..."
IP: 399E F0FD
[i]Thank you to all who have awaken form the deep slumbers and replied to my drop...good looks y'all........
P.e.a.c.e. I'll reply to your shit dogg...no doubt....[i] |
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02-26-03, 03:28 PM
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IP: 5153 3B92
Damn....wake up peeps....
P.e.a.c.e. |
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02-26-03, 04:07 PM
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IP: 618E 78B0
Aight,from sum1 who be spittin deep shit too,dis wuz a ill ass piece.It had sum twists in there dat made me actually wanna keep readin unlike othas on dis site.Keep writin Stay^
-Avi |
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02-26-03, 07:19 PM
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IP: 399E F0FD
Good looks with the reply, I'll hit your drops up with a reply....
To The Sky.... P.E.A.C.E. |
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02-26-03, 07:38 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
This was tight, the imagery was on point and so was the content. Good drop, I'm sure glad to be seeing some people dropping hotness in Open Mic now. Welcome to RB.
pz |
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02-26-03, 07:47 PM
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IP: 5153 3B92
Thank you Domain 9...not only for replying to my shit, but gracing my post with your ever-so pleasure giving sig....lol
Nice ass....lol P.e.a.c.e.[/i] |
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02-26-03, 08:26 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
definatly hot, i didnt even need to read the whole thing to write this, but im about to finish
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02-26-03, 10:05 PM
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IP: 5153 3B92
Word, best I've seen so far. Definitley a dope concept, and it was portrayed very nicely. Flow was something that just kept me reading, and content was good. Overall, nice piece. Keep 'em coming, Pz!
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02-27-03, 06:32 AM
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IP: C08C A1FD
Tight... Nice wordplay... good concepts... and it's ORIGINAL... keep it comin'... Peace...
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02-27-03, 09:12 AM
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IP: D79C 2834
See this was nice... after reading 4 open mic drops in a row that needed help, its nice to see one that didnt .... dope drop with nice imagery.... keep spittin... peace
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