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You ain’t expecting what I’m gonna throw at ya!

Aight, I’m gonna spit some hollow tips that’ll rip ya brain//
Have u talkin’ like a handicapped retard that’s on cocaine//
True banga leave ya numb like you've been injected with novacane//
My flow is insane//
So crazy I should be in the mental house, strapped and tamed//
Check it, I’m about to start packin’ the heat//
So I can go to ya hood and start jackin’ ya streets//
While u was on this rap site, your bitch was at my crib jacking my meat//
Me and you are two different types of meat//
You are chicken, and nigga I’m the beef//
You say you’re an all-star but don’t get too cocky//
This is gonna be a first round knock out, people startin’ to think I’m Rocky//
You the type of fag that has to sit down when you go potty//
Every time I spit a verse I leave your head spinning (The Exorcist)//
And it’s always good over bad, so you know that I’m winnin’//
(TAKES A BREATH)
Yo, yo, I got them type of bullets that tear through ya vest//
They leave ya organs exposed ya heart poppin’ out of ya chest//
And you think you hard ‘cuz you on house arrest//
But you probably got that shit ‘cuz you fucked a little boy at best//
The punchlines is leavin’ ya winded//
I take one crack at you and leave your battling license suspended//
It’s like this rhyme is a wrestling match, ‘cuz its a backbreaker//
So I guess you’re left with no spine//
Then my nine spits unlimited times//
So like Mortal Kombat, bitch ya soul is mine//

oh god i thought u were 'some-what' good......
im keyin now

U Brought Me BEEF ~ So AMEND Brought-The-Klever...
And U Couldnt Spit Heat Even If U Caught-A-Fever//
Only Time Ya Verse Is Hot Is When I Set-It-On-Fire...
U'll Be Sayin My Name More Then Reverands-In-Choirs//
I Cause Reverse Effects ~ So What U Drop-Is-Bombed...
And U Couldnt Come Personal Unless U Brought-My-Mom//
Even If Ya Verse Ate For Days I Wouldnt Find-It-Fat...
So Consider Yaself Dinner ~ Like One Of China's-Cats//
When U Question Ya Death ~ Amend Answers-With-Ease...
Cause Your Itchin To Die Like It Was A Cancer-In-Flea's//
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Im Not Surprised To Find U In This Losing Battle...
Cause This Kid Is Softer Then A Chewless-Apple//

I got to give it to ya, that was a hot verse. You tryin' to go for a round 2 though?

Vote= AMEND


I'd like to battle you. (AMEND)

damn...enigmatic wasn't ready for this.

AMEND: really tight flow\multis. some punches were a lil cliche...but you had some real tight shit in this verse. respect and props son

enigmatic: nothing really special about ya verse. too much braggin, not enuff dissin. to much thuggery too. you got some work to do before you battle me dawgs.

VOTE: AMEND

nice battle y'all

b ez

my votes for AMEND
good metaphors, c0o fl0w to it
enigmatic u sound like every other rapper tryen to cypher on forums. u need alot more practice

yay