20-30 lines

you better be ready punk

ya ok, im waiting, damn, 20-30?? you gonna write an essay??

you could shoot me 10 times and i still wouldnt die
shoot me 10 more and i wouldnt even cry
motherfucker i'll squash you down like a fly
so now its your time to prey
and when everything becomes grey
just look to another day
me and my RUFF ND READY KREW
will fuck you up by the time we finish with choo
beat you over the head
until you dead
no one blinks a eye
when you die
then your funeral comes
but no one can afford the funds
they remember that prankster
who was tryin to be a gangster
your mother thanks ya
for finishing her nightmare
since the day you were born she didnt even care
she even paid us a little fair
for taking care
of this mistake
the rubber split when she was making ya cakes
she didnt know until it was too late
so she had to live as a fake
living in such disgrace
wishing it never taken place

you gonna drop a line or not

I see this is your first battle, well you picked the wrong opponent
Cause the odds of you beating me, is the odds of a cop not eatin a donut
Cause lets face it nigga your rhymes are all random, like the amount of money in bets
Man you be spitten out more random shit then a kid with turrets
And i see your from England, i didnt know proper english kids was into this
Considering the most ghetto person from your country is Lennox Lewis
You aint a gangsta, shit if you had a knife you wouldnt know where to stick it
So go back to your home country and join in a nice quiet game of cricket
Kid your makin a fool of yourself, everyone knows you cant rap for shit
Your just embarrasin yourself, even your family's ashamed of it
And when you go out in public you gotta wear a hat
Cause there more people laughin at you then Martin Lawrence in RUN TEL DAT
And how you wrtie 20 lines in one minute, ah, dont worry about it, PSYCHE
If your gonna write a rhyme dont use it in a battle, post it in OPEN MIC
Cause if your gonna get paid and make it in this rap game, your rhymes have gotta be phat
But the only line that you'll ever be sayin is "DO YOU WANT FRIES WITH THAT?"
When this battles ova, I'll have so many votes, it will make your head twist
But you could always just end this early, just pull out a knife and play the violen on your wrist
Cause when this battles finished, suicide might be your only answer
Cause your weaknesses will be exposed more than a topless dancer

you think you can take me
you wouldnt even shake me
fool your actin like your cool
nobody like ya
so why dont you got back to school nd sit on a stool
learn summit, make some friends and even get little coochie
cause you a poosy
you need to listern to NWA and learn what they say
then youll figga how to be a proper nigga
you rap like your motha
when shes getting boned by my lil brotha without a rubba
whining away like you got summit to say
but nothin coming out apart from your spray
now your acting gay
you start to prey for forgiveness
wishing you new how to diss
but i am the business
I control this east coast
no one can even come close
Its bin a long time coming
P DRE has come from under rated to most anticipated
ive got my gun cocked back waiting for you to attack
im not getting any younger
but life is getting funner
im traveling at the speed of life
knowing one day im gonna have to fight
against all this shite
its a shame that yall excist
only in it for the money and the fame
its like yall playing a game

what the fuck are you doing????

what you mean wot am i doing??

your not supposed to post another 20 line rap after you already posted one!!!

why not?? i can if i wanna

well your stupid in the head if you do because they dont count, only your 1st one does.

well sorry, i didnt say that it was only a one verse rap now did i, think about it before shoot your mouth off

omg, ok, you realize that a rap battle is a verse against a verse... not an essay vs. an essay...then you write another one!! Hello.... you oviously dont know all that much about a battle do u??

anyway, votes please on this battle, he posted 1st so his 2nd little essay thing isnt part of the battle^^^^^