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yo yo a nigga like u is quik ta get ripped/da same way when shit go down my 9 is quik to get gripped/
and by da end of this yo dignity will be stripped/afta i done you gone need repairs like hud homes/you da kinda nigga that faggots like to touch on/whit a name like dooz you was bound ta looze/probably gone get up here and spit weak shit like you done paid ya dues/den get all worked up and loos ya cool/all dats gone do is piss me off/and when dat happens shit happens/like knockin heads off/
you is prolly sweata den candy and ya rhymes prolly sound like some said by brandy/like its just one of dos days dat a gurl goes thru/we know yeah wear maxi ain't know need to hide da truth

nigga i see you shiver n quiver when i cut out yo liver/
serve you sliver by sliver, plus yo moms a head giver/
you best call yo babysitter, cuz you'z a brick shitter/
bitch you up against dooz, if you snooze you loose/
even while u awake leavin u confused/
"howd he do that? wutd he say?" , try yo luck another day/
your rhymes cant be classified as nuttin else but gay/
so heres how we gone do this, ima walk you through this/
you lie down while i take the crown, ima show u who the king is/
you better call the firesquad to put out my flamin flow/
might take a while, unlike you, you gone be quick to go/
dont loose my cool for bitches like you, you like a defectice drone/
get out tha way nigga, im claimin the throne/
you just got beat by Hollywood's own

oh my god, this is the weakest battle i have heard in my life, i might exadurate sometimes but shit these musta been some tired "rappers" to write some shit like that, my vote goes to the next person that post on this shit cuz that was horrifying like seeing rupal in the shower with oprah butt ass nakid while they both wearing hard hats holding bowling balls.

if it sucked so bad, y dont u give some constructive critisicm instead o hatin on it?

cuz hes a hata leavin dem wack ass sayins at da end of his shit. it was pretty weak, but hey everybody was weak( note i said was)
but just to get dis battle rollin!
my vote=fayet-nom rep da ville homie( hollywood need ta see la fo a weak) lol stay up ya'll