ok kid, ill be waitin on your verse

imma spit later ima bout to bounce
is that aight?

how long you gonna be gone

ill spit now i dont gotta leave for a while

ok cool

yo.. you gonna spit??

You cant write, you lack verbal insight/
verses make as much sense as wearin sunglasses at night/
Iverson, idolizin an individual you could never compare too/
bitin titles of others strands you with a spare tooth and catz attemptin to embarass you/
harassin you with a pen clutched by a hand/
return to whatever you do this is new to you like pioneers explorin a new land/
if you tried to spit for currency it would take tha clothes off ya back/
left naked like a salad with out dressing stressin that you can still rap/
but you cant, you failed in that department/
many stories like apartments begin startin when i disrespect you authority like cartmen/
to approach my presence forces the blood rush so quickly it'll make your heartspin/
on target like marksmen makin my point like a paper im markin/
restart your lyrical program like computers and vacate my area like comuters/
accuse me of bitin rhymes but i dont, i chew em/
spit em back out and rearrange em so you can use em/

Damn nigga, your rap has more holes then a target at a shooting range
This rap shit just aint workin for you, so its time for a change
Only way ima stop murderin you is if the price is right like Bob Barker
But if it aint, the scars you get from this battle will be permanent, like a sharpie marker
Speakin of game shows, i got one for ya to play, its called lets make a deal
You gotta do somethin, cause your rhymes be slippin like some1 steppin on a banana peel
I wish i could say i know how you feel, but i cant lie like that
That would be like A Sumo Wrestler sayin that he isn't fat
You took almost an hour to write your rhyme, and thats the rhyme that you wrote
That shit is sadder than watching a retard tryin to use a paddle boat
If there was a ref in this battle he'd have seen enough and would be ringin the bell
Cause my rhymes is just to hot, and yours was uglier Than Sam Cassell
And the chances of you wining is the chance of surviving a case of cancer
But no matter how bad the beating, just remember, suicide's not the answer

uppin for votes please

dude you rhymed like every line
range-change
marker-barker
etc.........

ya and...

yo straight up iverson took this he came wayyy harder much respect billy the fvk u talken bout u rhymed every line no shit thats called a rhyme scheme and talent so ma vote goes to iverson he took this easy holla bak 1

yo thanks for the vote X. Holla Bak

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