5-10 lines Kleverone goes first

i got my time running out but be4 i bouce i'm gonna spite all over this fuk......i throghbody this nobody u can call me a munt but this cunt i'll be chopping up with my dangerous lyrics and be helppin the spirits ingage in how i get down be4 i clown on this overstayerz ass....... i fell sorry for you as i spill the bills on what u have to pay as punishment.
u can say wat u think but never blink cause i'll be right behind your mind knockin on your head
u should make me winner with the small amount of clock but i still seem to mock enogh.................


your turn
Holla bak

''We SeE yOu''

This fool can't even rap and he calls himself Kleverone/
My raps actually rhyme, it is clear i have one./
The fact is you suck, cut it out man your done/
Of course you're a noob/
your brain is dull step back from the tube/
Your "ryhmes" lack intensity/
maybe its to hard for you, too much complexsity/
You are so dumb, i hope you can tie your own shoes/
if you don't you WILL trip, just like now you WILL LOSE/

uppin for votes

this battle isn't over till your mum wakes up.............
i can see your alwayz on this but i got a life i'll be fuking your wife to death so don't lose a breath on this spit i throgh your way cause this be itchin me all day.......
how can u say i can't rhyme when i only got seconds to show my diamz
now we know whos a the binner cause i know i'm the winner

STEP AGAIN IF U LIKE



''We SeE yOu''

Kleverone.. I really do not know what to say. Uhh.. was that even a rhyme? I sincerely hope that you weren't trying. That was the worst thing I have ever read. First thing you need to do is enroll yourself into some english classes. You mispelled just about every word you "spite" during this battle. Second thing you need to do is add some sort of rhyme scheme to your rap. Seriously, my Grandmother could out rap your ass at this point. Ugh. I give up. Vote - whoever he battled against.

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well stated. KleverOne you aren't living up to your name. Look through old battles and see what's up.

my vote= estilo he made some kinda sence!