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Old 06-09-03, 01:00 PM   #1
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Consume at Own Risk {Death Of a Red Dreagon) Last Verse

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I Erupt And Shine While These Punches Disrupt Ya Spine~
~Clutch Tha Blind..."Rattle Ya Thoughts" And Leave You Wit A "Corrupted Mind"!!!!~
~Ya "Luck Is Mine" Like I Had Ya "Clover In My Possesion"~
~Verbal Confessions "Murder Intestines" And Leave You Wit "Herbal Congestion"~
~No Further Objections, Just Lethal Injections Of Feetle Infections~
~And Its Like Ya Bars Is "Pregnant" Tha Way I Can "Sea" Thru Ya "Sections"!!!~...{Think About It}...
~Leave You Expectin Tha Loss....Boss And Toss This Cross Dresser~
~Wit Lost Pleasures...Gotta Be "Rappin Wit Broke Themometers"...Tha Way He Spittin Wit "False Measures"!!!~
~Floss Treasures And Pack Dialekts Wit High Effects~
~Face It...--> Ya Bars "Be-Too-Gay" Like Tha "Younger Version Of I-M-X"!!!~..{Think}
~I Fire Tecks And Wire Text Tha Heats And Prespires Necks~
~Might As Well "Change My Name To Nursing Homes" Tha Way I "Retire Vets"!!!~


you fucken weirdo, trying to goafter my ~GRANDMA?~/
the jealousy of my ~GRANDPA~, will cut you like a ~HAND SAW~/
I leave you ~DEAD FROM THA GLOCK~ ya ~Girls HEAD ON MY COCK~/
like in art class.... i spray ~RED ON YA SMOCK~(smock is like an apron)
I ~SAID IT NOW WATCH~, im straight ~DAN-GER-OUS~/
your ~LAME YOU SUCK~, now i gotta ~AIM AND BUST~/
my ~CRA-ZI-NUSS~(craziness), is comin in different ~DIRECTIONS~/
my ~ARSENAL OF WEAPONS~, got you needin ~PROTECTION~/
i ~MESS YA COMPLEXION~, give you a ~BULLET INJECTION~/
your full of red and you stop like a light at an INTERSECTION/
so ~HERES A CORRECTION~, bitch... I ~OWN THIS FORUM~/
i ~DETHRONED and TORE HIM~, all this bitch ~OWNS IS BOREDOM~/
but i ~STONE and SWORD HIM~, meaning ~THROW ROCKS AND STAB HIM~/
you suck ~COCKS AND GRAB THEM~, i spray ~GLOCKS at your ADAMS..../
....apple.... or ~WHATEVER ITS CALLED~/
you and your boyfriend, bitch...~TOGETHER YOU'LL FALL~/
~FOREVER and Y'ALL...~ will ~ALWAYS BE THERE~/
theres ~NO WAY you'll SCARE...~ me, ~go AWAY, i dont CARE~/
~RAP4LIFE~ betta ~DIE~... betta shut it ~4LIFE~/
~C'EST LA VI~... im runnin away wit yo ~WIFE~/
if this was a real battle, id say "GET THE FUCK OFF MY STAGE"/
your in my rhymebook, a SLAVE to a PAGE///

~Empires Stretch As I Verbally Murder This Waste Of Talent~
~Erase Tha Violence??...I'll "Hit You Wit Punches" Till Ya Feet And Face Are "Balanced"!!!~

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Old 06-09-03, 01:40 PM   #2
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Old 06-09-03, 01:44 PM   #3
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This was Nice........You're improoving man..... this Piece had Nice Wordplay ..................Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55665
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Old 06-09-03, 02:34 PM   #4
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alright dogg...im gonna try it ...



i spit non- simlistic sick shit/
so that 10 guys with vicious minds snortin coke lines couldnt get this/
lyricz, ha! sorry you got none/
battling me? yeah right he'll hit the deck and run/
he'll be a bucket of ashes when i burn this fake/
ill incinerate his corpse and make him "urn" his fate/
im gonna play this fool , its to easy to defeat him quickly/
he sucks so much on the mic, he'll prolly leave a hickey/
somebody get him a new foot!, cause he just got defeated/
or get him a wheelchair cause he just got seated/
my stats went higher, yours just depleated/
lyrically deleted/
i know you cant flow, you'll prolly use throw back raps/
and no body likes you like tennis shoes with velcro straps/
your rhymes should be put in a trash can, they'll never be clean/
your lyrically fucked in the ass man, like reactin a rape scene/
my words grow, your ego needs a nationality/
but in all actuality,ill be seizing the galaxy/
and squeezing its seams till it seems too be the size of the sea of galilee/
anything you say ill lyrically kill/
only way ill "squash "this beef, is if i "pound ya grill"/
how many times ya'll wanna hear this whore rhyme?/
he can spit a whole verse, ill slay him in 4 lines/
ill beat 4 guys with 45's 4 times and end all there lives/
you actually think you can beat me? sorry, nope/
this is lyrical prison and you just dropped the soap!/

alright thats enough.... my hands are getting tired!.... your turn

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Old 06-09-03, 02:47 PM   #5
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same as bash...improved alot...i thought the vocab escpecially...
hot shit. return tha favout on the link below.
~1~



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Old 06-09-03, 03:43 PM   #6
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nice spit grym,i liked th efirst verse more,then the ther,the style switch didnt suit,but you had some hard hitting lines in thtere,the intestines line was ill..murderous shit you got going,liked the pregnant line,still dunno what imx is though...but anywya,nice drop,i liked the last two bars alot,they were a nice finishing,good drop dun,keep em up.



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Old 06-09-03, 03:47 PM   #7
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Immature the cheesy ass rb group
IMX
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Old 06-09-03, 03:50 PM   #8
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^^never heard of em,ahha,mus tbe bad.
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Old 06-09-03, 03:53 PM   #9
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yeah the multi's made your flow.

vocab was dope. kinda like a come and battle me type of flow..

i felt it.
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Old 06-09-03, 11:21 PM   #10
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Thnx
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Old 06-10-03, 10:34 AM   #11
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Uppn sum more
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Old 06-27-03, 06:09 AM   #12
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Damn...I used to think myou was weak as hell.This was some of the besy shit I read.Do you still got Beef with those BRE bitches.If so,check this shit out.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6941#post576941
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