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04-05-03, 01:04 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Peep Tell me if this sux (Streetz of Havoc)
IP: 4577 CD9A
Theres-Havoc, The Streets-Take-Souls-The Brutalitys-Tragic-*
'People-Are-Made-N-Broken, Flesh Dissapearin' Like-Magic-* Flesh Gets-Torn-Off-Niggaz-Bones So the Skeleton-Gets-Cold-* Just-Like-The-Block-At Night Lonely-Ness Feels-Thirty-Below-*(-30 Degrees) Let-It-Be-Known, On-The-Block Theres Real Thugz-N-Then-Theres-Chickenz-* Stay-Smacked-From-Weed Given From The Streetz As My Street Money-Thickens-* Drive By's-An Deadly Straight Shots...Led-Poison Forced Into-Skullz...Causin' Blood-Clots-*(Tru--) Slangin'-Rocks, Establishing-With-Crack-Addicts-Who Husslte On-Blocks-* They-Won't Stop On The-Block Until They're Life-Less Corpse Is On The Side-Walk-* An-The-Enemy-In-The Blue-Colored Uniform-Out'Lines They Body-With-Chalk-* Pushin' From Crack-All The Way-Down-To That Killer Shit -Heroin-* Niggaz' Just Don't Learn-On-The-Streets Til' The-'Gun Barrel'-Is What-Dey-Starin' In-*(damn) Death-Its-Self-Defies-Me-Scared-To Feel Heat Go Threw An Bare-Over In My Throat-* I Can't Even Picture My Niggaz Say "Damn, 'Jae' Got-"Smoked"-*(Haha!) Jae Got Choked, Or Else Suicide, Or Maybe Jae Got Shanked-* All I Want Is To-Make-That-Money-An-Have My Niggaz-Sayin "Damn, Jae-Got-Bank"-*(---) I 'Smoke' That "Dank", Find Another Nigga To Shank-* My Hollow Tips'll Leave 'Red' All Over-Ya'-Bytch-An The-Shit-Ain't-Paint-* Hell Nah' The Bullets Don't Stop At You, They Keep Goin-* The 'Teck' Blowin', Until Ya'-Fuccin'-Arteries Showin-* Its Theory Dog Doin' What I'm Suposed To-* You-Ain't Got To Lose-Ya'selff I'll Do-It-For-You-* 'Monestary', 'Murder', An 'Mayhem' The Greatest Of "M's"-* Tear's Drop From Ya' Kin, As My Niggaz Sing Ya' Funeral Hymn-* If A Niggaz Talkin' Shit We Put A Bullet In Him-* An If He Lives May God Help Him If His Ass Can't Swin-* Blood Pool, Jae Theory On Tracks You'll Feel The Wrath-* I Will' Be Ya'-Wash-Rag-While Your Takin' Ya' Blood-Bath-* I Send Niggaz To Hell First Class, Ya'll Internet Faggots Aint Ready-* I'll Grab-The "Mercede",An Make Fuccin' Human "Spaghetti"-* How-Do-I-Expect-God To Send Me Above-* When I Made So Many Niggaz Name Come After 'In Memory Of'-* My Bars On The "Net" Come Out Ya' Monitor An Right In Ya' Chest-* Crusual Enough To Knock You From In Front Of Ya' Desk-* |
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04-05-03, 01:57 PM | #2 | ||||||
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kid i see u got some skills but this whole self promotin concept is overdone......i mean atleast u aint usint he same regurgitated 90s rap bullshit lines but.....still gain some originality in the concept of ya next peice
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04-05-03, 01:59 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
dam good drop man
liked the flow and vocab reads well dunno about the subject (a lot of shit about guns) but nice drop either way |
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04-05-03, 02:08 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 5BDB 8A97
ya...it sucked
keep writting |
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04-06-03, 03:34 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 703B ED0E
What is your Theory? I expect with a name like that you'd be deep. But you're just like tha rest...spendin' words cheap!
Forget Tha guns...just flow... |
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