aite...

15 bar max......1 bar equals 1 line
5 ta win 3 KO
no crew hate or d/r votes
no bitin feedin or recyclin....

im checkin in......waitin fah u ta spit....

o yea verse due in 30 minutes.....i dont like dat prewrit shit

yo this whole games a question, but im the answer
they call me tha illest, cuz my rhymes sicker than cancer
yea these words leave you in pain, for real you hurtin
wen you awaken your surrounded by nurses and surgeons
because i read all your old shit, and never the less,
you can tell by my insults i wasn't impressed
jersey is MY HOUSE, and that shits haunted
if you look for me, i'm on america's most wanted
i called you out, and now you battlin'-to-tempt-me,
ever since i started i been embarrasin-mcs
i'll leave you in a pile wit a hundred dead-men
cuz i been wantin to rip you since my mom was pregnant
so if u real smart u better quit that shit
i said that i would cook ya, and i did, thats it


burnin......

HAHA…wat tha fuc is a HEAT MC??


Im expectin perfection…ill put tha “mac” “in your hand”…but u stil cudnt “hand me” “Bernie”//
Gave u simple procedures…but your prewrits r stil in tha wrong direction…ill put real “heat” ta ya chest like a “Miami jersey”//(Miami heat)
Jus try ta “burn me”…but im warnin ya…”second hand smoke” aint healthy//
How u goin try ta get at me… wen ya rhymes sound like u learned ta rap from tha marshal mathers LP?//
Youll b left locked in a room wit a sign 2 tha window sayin help me//
Stil 100 pounds(light weight)… I shud b ya mentor, n e questions?? Ima heavyweight jus ask me//
Ma rhymes lead ta “vision imparement”…erymornin youll b “seein ya self” … like u wus “mary kate n Ashley”//
U studied ma skill? das a bitch move…so u basically lerned off me//
Dis loss im bout ta giv u…I guess u earned for free//
N like free prostitutes ima jus put a dick up in dis slut//
Dis nicca think he nice….u 2 “into yourself” dawg like u got “ya finger up ya butt”//
Getting impatient wit u….like I was on line waiting//
Youll get “raped” wen our verses “meet” like we wus doin “online dating”//

wat eva im done...uppin fah votes

wow man no matter what anybody says, you can't flow

lyrics are at least recognizable (not good)

but you have absolutely no flow to your rhymes at all

....and thats only talkin about the times when you actually do rhyme......please

win or lose......your garbage...

i agree with heat, verse needs a lot more flow. lines are probably a little too long, still did enough to take this battle though.

poll vote - JbRePpInNJ

my thoughts too^

my vote=JbRePpInNJ

2-0..u stil talkin shit man ?? u think im garbage?? fuccin elevate....dont talk bout flow....cuz if my flow wus that bad y am i winning?? n if u claim that im garbage wat does that make u?? before u talk shit make sure your at least winning....or at least hav 1 vote....

VOTE=JbRePpInNJ
BEACAUSE HE WAS BETTER

yo heat, you talk like you had a good rap, but jb killed you

vote=jbreppinNJ

exactly......das tha point im tryin ta make... n guess wat heat.....u got knocked tha fucc out!!!!!!!!.....4-0 me....

well.. the poll is only at 2-0, and thats what counts, but no worries, there is no way he should get any votes over you

tru....damm i forgot ta check dat

for as much shit heat talks i like what hes got

vote= heat mc