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just a flow
IP: 60BF 1D04
juss a lil flow
As my life gets worse, I feel more and more like ridden in a hurse What did I do to deserve this curse? It's my life that I wanna disperse Im so sick of the pain, Everything in my world feeling like rain All I feel is utter distain, I'm trapped in this world and going insane. There is nobody around to hear me cry, There's gonna be nobody there when I die I give up on everything cuz I don't wanna try, What can I do to make the pain pass bye? Why does god do this to me? This hurt is all I can see I feel so empty, I feel like a branchless tree Everyday a tear falls down my cheek, I look at the future and it seems so bleak I can't deal with it anymore I'm getting weak, And death is all I seek It's been to long since I seen daylight, Cuz everyday im in a constant fight And when I think it's possible I might, I remember that I'm never right God take this pain away, For me there is no brighter day All there is left to say, Is now my coffin is where I lay. |
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IP: D3CD 5FCE
all i can say is listen to ---'Tupac'- 'Keep ya head up'......
Nice verse but it aint as bad as u think, i been through alotta shit n ive got through, may-b u gotta stop thinkin about the problems n start thinkin about the soloutions?....... ...pzzz.... |
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IP: 58C6 6767
nice peice deep, yeh shit does happen dat y we write bout it n i think writtin bout wots goin on is a way of dealin wit it,gettin ova it coz u feel like ur got it off ur chest. feelin dis GrAn THeF
peace~roX~
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im capable of anything my amagination can give me wings, like doves flyin over streets watching many things//Nas |
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IP: C0FD 9CC0
That shit is deep and its tight. Ii have been through many tough times and i have made it through and i think you can to. I am not sayin i know how u feel because i dont know what u have to deal wit. Just look to another day and let it pass. Writtin helps me alot and hanging wit the people who bring me up not down. I am lookin forward to readin ur next piece. I'm out. Peace
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IP: 60BF 1D04
This is y i write cuz it helps wid shit makes me feel good to get shit out, thanxz for the replies
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