-Just a Fuck-
By: Crook Ed, db, pHraNtiK (in that order)

Crazy Blunted, I know my pimp walk be turnin some heads
Peepin this dime, Know my slick talk'll get her in bed
Protect my playa identity, but still make her aqquaintance
Spittin sweet nothins is her ear, but never to blatent
Im Patient, She buyin my game like she lovin to be in control
Night is young and we vibin, back to my hotel room we strolled
Cross the threshold, pop the criss on ice right as we enter the room
Then to ruin the Mood, She says, I dunno if we should do this too Soon
I said, Do what.... Oh that,haha, No girl I just wanna Chill
So Sit down relax we can chat about past relations until
The sun comes up and shines inside the window with rays
Thats what got her, She lookin at me with a cute face thats dazed
And says, Aight enough I cant take it, lets do this now, today
Ok, but first I must be a gentleman and ask... whats ya name?
-Commence to going buck wild on dis dame

This is db, girl im famous..an i dont really give a fuck what ya name is
i aint a gentlemen, but i'll be gentle when u put ya mouth where my brain is
im was the king at boning this bitch......she wasn't de-throning my shit
told her i loved her....only cuz she was deep throating my dick
she started to choke and gag, so i backed off...then rammed it back in
bitch-slapped her sad grin...pulled out to cock-smack her mad grin
shes started tripping and was like "i opened my past with you
shared my stolen cash with you"..i turned and said Open ur ass, will you?
and she didnt, so i did, and told her Slut, Big mistake
just then i pulled out of her ass, she turned her head..and i bust in her face
told her to face the rest, Im in WP..I even amaze the best
I started laughing..cuz there was more cum dripping off her face than sweat
so i pulled out, Shouted Im the king..and told her Face the throne, bitch
just then i stuck my cock back in her mouth, so she could taste her own shit...

Im known for it- party til late- find a bitch an hit it
But last time she had a fit- didn’t really wanna suck my dick
Lied to the court and said It was rape and abuse
Each tear she shed tightened the noose
Families cry and throw shit at me- hit me- hate me
But if they could envision what I see- that she had positioned me
Her terrible lies infect the ears and poisoned thee
Not callin her back was the end of me- never again can I party
Got me Locked in a cell with serial killa’s bein sent to therapists
Cant seem to acknowledge bein labelled a violent rapist
Sit on my cold flat bed shit outta luck, thinking of how it was…
…Just a fuck

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UUUPPPP for feedback

well i like ur flow, but i dont like how u thinkin on that piece- good rhyme and hit tho- peace.

^^ Im sorry but Wtf kinda response was that?? anyways... uppin..

upin.

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lol umm.. nah.. i guess... lol it sucked... boring man... i mean ok the flow was good but man... there was really no originality in this at all... lack of effort and patience i think

thanx for the feed...it may be negative

but we know this wasnt as perfect as out crew..we each did our part in 5 minutes


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flow was very good, the topic was iight structure nice
the piece juss kinda had a played vybe to it
but i think hit the topic decent
6.5/10