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Old 03-12-03, 09:08 AM   #1
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.1st Round KO.

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I stay releasing venemous sentences with edicate//
And if you mess with this perfectionist//
It's evident your neck will twist like linda blair in the exorcist//
So who's the best in this? I got bitches saying, "Oh, his music rules!"//
'Cus i'm quick to bruise a dude after they get stuck like super glue//
Make you lose a tooth while your head spins like a rubix cube//
Stupid crews get eaten like i was hannibal lector//
They're dismantled with clever animal lectures//
You don't wanna fight me bitch, cuz your hands will get severed//
This cannibal's better then every nerd on the planet//
You fuck with me? Nah, 'cus you'll get served like Pete Sampras//
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Old 03-12-03, 09:25 AM   #2
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Nice rhymin yo
Short but creative.

And if you mess with this perfectionist//
It's evident your neck will twist like linda blair in the exorcist//

That's hot, and:

Stupid crews get eaten like i was hannibal lector//
They're dismantled with clever animal lectures//

Clever...

Stay up!
Peace.
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Old 03-12-03, 10:41 AM   #3
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similies wern't very good but the flow wasa dope good ish.
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Old 03-12-03, 11:31 AM   #4
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this was a decent battle verse

i like the excorcist line.. that was dope..

vocab and multis were on point... i like it

short and effective.
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Old 03-12-03, 03:08 PM   #5
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.Good Lookin' Out.

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Thanks for uppin'... appreciate the comments. Everyone else, don't sleep on this joint.
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Old 03-12-03, 04:27 PM   #6
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man,if u used dis in a battle,I woulda loved to c tha otha kid's reply.Ya had nice punches and vocab up n there.Im uppin dis for ya.Stay ^
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Old 03-13-03, 09:02 AM   #7
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.Battlin' Verses.

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Man, I be tryin' to battle fools... but they stay fakin' on that shit. That's why when a hot verse comes into my head, I try to post it, so at least I can get some hits on how it looks. Thanks for uppin' though....
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Old 03-13-03, 10:33 PM   #8
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Short...but tight...nice drop, overall: 7/10...

Stay Spittin...

P.e.a.c.e.
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Old 03-13-03, 10:52 PM   #9
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NIGGA DAT SHIT WAS HOTT...NICE VOCAB...DONT TAKE TO DA HEART WHUT HAVE OF DESE NIGGAS SAY CUASE DEY SWEAR DEY BIG L OR BIGGIE WHEN DEY AINT BUT HOTT RHYMES STAY /\
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Old 03-13-03, 11:33 PM   #10
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yo u dont mind if i use that in my next battle do u? We could just say i was borrowin. lol that was fire cuz mad skillz stay up
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Old 03-14-03, 09:01 AM   #11
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.Been A Long Time.

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It's been a minute since i've actually seen some responses on this RB shit... good to be back yo. Keep uppin'...
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Old 03-14-03, 09:58 AM   #12
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nice diss for a battle.. i understand, when stuff comes to ur head u wana get the shit down befo u forget it ..
keep spittin..
peace out...
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Old 03-14-03, 10:25 AM   #13
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was a bit short but anyway

nice vocab an wordplay good topic 2 keep it up

jus try 2 make it longer nxt time pe@ce
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Old 03-14-03, 01:03 PM   #14
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I don't always got time for a whole song... so when shit comes to my head, I got on RB and post. Thanks for uppin' though.
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