This took me like 2 mins i just did it cos it was sumin on ma mind


Have you ever got the feeling no one loves you gives a shit about you,
Then i know how you feel, i feel the same way too,
Many people wont feel me, but i know theres a few,
Listen to what im saying, im sitting here praying,
Thinking why is this life worth living,
Letting out whats on my mind, an no im not pretending,
Tryna express that feeling, the one in ya mind that little thing,
Consists of your emotions, your deepest devotions,
explains your motions,
It makes you wanna cry, then after you sitt an wonder why,
Makes you wanna die, tells you your enemys should fry,
isit my brain?, naa its something else not tha same,
But yet it drives through my head like a train,
Has me sad, then later has me glad,
When i do wrong, its got me feeling bad,
Makes me think, why dont maxi get what he deserves,
No matter how hard i try, i get bought down by my nerves,
Tryna grab the mic an pen, an spit these verbs,
My life go round an round, its fulla curbs,
Never a strait path, will never have respect in my wrath,
Never will my enemys see my aftermath,
Yet this shit in my head, got me wanting dead,
An id rather go an do it instead,
Of having a life of pain, downpour of hate like tha rain,
Yet it still persist, in the back of my head, i wonder whats this,
I cant explain, isit my hunger for fame?,
Or isit all tha shit i bin through in vain,
All this makes me wanna think, let my emotions go everytime i blink,
Or when someone say my stuff stink,
Shit i dunno where im going with this rhyme,
When i have the answer to this puzzle, ill drop it next time

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it's a deep concept, but too many people use it... honestly I'm sick of reading crap like this.. there's only so many lines you can use on this topic and most are played.. still as far as rhyme and shit go, it was a'ight, had some ok wordplay.. that's bout it...

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"Many people wont feel me, but i know theres a few" yeah I'll be part of a few... if you read my last piece called "Alone", you'll see I sort of feel where you coming from...
Shit was deep, yeah a cry for help, but it didn't sound desperate or pathetic or nothing... you got something going here... straight flow, and pretty good rhyming...

Peace

thanks man