I dont know how many of ya'll actually apreciate some God lovinlyrics but here it is anyway


(Kinda like on EMinem lose yourself type tempo)


I can see him sittin in bed now with his eyes to the ceiling
slowly but surely at a steady pace his God lovin heart is peelin/
He's talkin with the devil evil cards he's now dealin
and then he starts to feel this most excruciatin feelin/
communication is like treason hatred for no reason
to him grace is a sin and sin is so pleasin/
He asked his father to divide the land
most likely he wants the biggr half cuz he feels that hes a grown man/
He thinks he's the top dog hes grandiose he wants power
He thinks he doesnt need God his world could never be sour/
So i think that u should pack ya bags and
go somewhere where u can adjust to livin in rags man/
But u say uh uh cuz u got bigger things on ya mind
u wanna go where u can shine ya lights always lime/
But what u fail to realize which will soon be ur surprise
ya so called friend Satan gotta gray sheet wrapped around ya eyes/
But u still think he's ya friend that hes down till the end
u believe he's the one that'll clean u from the sin/
You believe that u can make it cuz ya roads real smooth
this fight with God is unwinnable so u now u will lose/
Dont u see this is the Lord and u fightin
Youre not lennox lewis and hes not Mike tyson/
Can u belive it ya lil buddy kept all of this secret
been tryna make ya life a livin hell since u was a fetus/
And now u goin back to dad to the life u once had
restore ya relationship with God and ya life wont be so bad/
And take the chance to get him back in ya life
ya arms to short to box with God u not winnin thid fight/

what ya'll think

Yo I'm an Atheist man!! nah.... hell nah!.... lol.... I'm playing....

I was feeling your message dawg... you had a good flow in the begining but then it sort of lost some of its rhythm, then it picked it back up, then down... you know... but it was overall pretty good... you but some rhymes just didn't seem to fit for me thought... like that Lennox and Tyson rhyme... I don't know... just seemed out of place
I don't know if I can hear this topic on that Em beat, but thas just me...
these verses weren't bad at all man... keep spittin...

Peace

Yeah, yo, not bad dogg, religious concepts are deep shit, always good, u had some good rhymin, bbut yeah I agree with Alias, I dunno how it would fir wit em beat, but everyone has they own way of spittin and u might fit it in well.

Peace Out!!!!

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yo crim,
I don't know, i thought that flowed we dog...

Dont u see this is the Lord and u fightin
Youre not lennox lewis and hes not Mike tyson/
Can u belive it ya lil buddy kept all of this secret
been tryna make ya life a livin hell since u was a fetus/

that was tight,

And now u goin back to dad to the life u once had
restore ya relationship with God and ya life wont be so bad/
And take the chance to get him back in ya life
ya arms to short to box with God u not winnin thid fight/

yo i feel this - deep shit...

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