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Old 03-17-03, 02:04 PM   #1
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Sometimes I sit and relize I neva loved/ only hate and despise
only thing ive seen is pain and suffering,neva let a tear role down my eyes/for fallin brothers and slained mothers/at night i just put the covers over my head/ prayin to god sayin I wish i was dead/wakin up to only 2 slices of bread/no bacon and eggs Instead/I look for god for guidance/pray these snitches be slient/
hide my stash and hope the fuckin police cant find it/cuz i see rappers wit ice thats blindin and the fancy cars they drivin/thats all I need,all I ever wanted/to afford jewelry so I can flaunt it
and bust catz who want it/tryin to jack me luckily i have my boys to back me/and pack mandatory heat in the back seat/cowards im poor but im str8 gutter/kidnap your son and beat your baby's mother/gotta keep flowin never stutter/have to keep slick til i get a hummer/and tell detective Smith i'll see him this summer




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Old 03-17-03, 09:59 PM   #2
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yo,
this aint a bad drop...a bit hard to follow only coz of the layout...
try shorten the lines a bit to make it easy for cats to read...

keep writing though dog.
peace.
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Old 03-17-03, 11:42 PM   #3
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I agree it's hard to follow. but from what i got the shit was good. deep. keep postin
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