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back on some love/hate mess
IP: 9E97 00AB
harsh time called for some old bull shit
Alone in here I spit my game think of a flow tha might change some thin's I let it fly but I hold back all this shit inside and now I'm black crushed an tore pain I endure smoked to tha sac this blunts got me trippin flat on my back times have changed an the flow has too I'll add some mo lines then fuck it I'm thru I'm spittin at u haven't heard nuttin yet so I keep it on tha lo back on tha set my whole crew be clownin on u sit back an listen I'm still reppin fo u my heart is yours an u know that still damn y life gotta be so real I let it go an turned away lead astray from yo evil wayz gain my stats an rip it loose in the end I still wanna be wit u |
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: 144A ADA4
no real topic.. flow was pretty good, I could follow it.. vocab is elementary, u do need some serious elevatin'....
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Had some direction, like Blunt said need some vocab work and rhymin', creative shyt that I need too, but hey thas why we're here to critique each other nice try tho.
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