Yo i want y'all to tell me what y'all think bout this joint i made against some cat named Disaster a while ago:

I'll blast your ass to space like u was Lance Bass--
Fishes like u is what i'm fishin for
U dont want more, u dont want war
Omniscient like third-person, i reveal thoughts of many
to my dogs on the block, aint "No Doubt" i'm "Rocksteady"
beware yo beware there's gonna be a Disaster
this dude thinks he can rhyme, but he's only an actor
you're white and black but i own u bitch
my poorest rhymes will capitalize the rhymes you think is rich
sayonara bitch
i'll fill u up with cyanide gas
you're outta school, but im about to take your ass to class
im on your ass like drawers, i'll sweep u more than i sweep my floor
Disasters are dangerous but why u playin it safe u little whore
You suck more than pups hangin like bats on tits sucklin
whenever u quack quack your ass better start duckin
u clueless like a buck when i bring the buckin
im a boston celtic, so i keep on luckin
i aint got no remorse and i aint stoppin for what
i leave permanent fingerprints on all the dogs that i touch
i won't burn by your blaze, my body's just too tough
my rhymes are a million times hotter than J. Lo in the buff
Your gonna, lay my punches to rest?
put your, fangs in my flesh
no disrespect, but your fangs are dull like plant eaters
My rhymes might be cold but im bustin u with two heaters
than i'll force your wife to beat your meat with a couple of cleavers
You get crapped on more than toilets
u get sat on, farted on more than my couch
by the way, i'll walk on u more than my rug
and u piss your pants when u see a snail or when i bust some slugs
when u pick up the mic, ima say lemme borrow that
cuz your lazy spits
your done when i start to yakk
You aint nuttin but a fag, comin at me from the back
you show no prudence, your open to my attack
just cuz your name starts with D, it dont mean that u deezed
even though u get play kid, u still cant mess with these--
rhymes is heavy
tickin like a time bomb tickin
you get puched in the lip for every bar that im kickin
quit the bitchin
you'll be better after i stop livin
and your stinginess will grow cuz i cant stop givin
u bite off more than u can chew with all the rhymes im dishin
all disaster rhymes about is how often he's killin
age aint nuttin but a number, i'm only 14
if it's past my bedtime, im givin u sweet dreams
how do i have the means to come up with this rhyme scheme?
u aint thinkin right, u sliced by my guillotine
Mother Goose could never help u with a damn rhyme
Addidas couldnt hook u up with a damn line
Sean Paul and Sprite couldnt give u a light that's lime
aint there aint no watch that could ever lengthen your time
I'm--
honorably, anatomically, atomic in this game
missy can stand the rain now cuz u bringin her pain
the only way you'll "Shyne" is if he escaped from upstate
if i rock 8 plus 70 u got 55 minus 8
if u dont know, that's 78 and 47
platinum and silver, atomic numbers of two elements
this site better slow down and take heed
this nigga K can kill with the flappin of his teeth
and he's here to stop a Disaster that specializes in his specialty, of especially, rhymin about killin all these emcees
but i aint gonna be a victim, he's only got a water gun
this dude comes from a "Village" that's filled with a lot of "Slum"
the lyrics u make chum, makes u lyrically challenged
all your wack spittin will make u crash and burn like u was Richie Valence
ima clean up your mess with one sheet of bounty--
hunter is what i am, u can't tear me im "jazzy",
and "strong" like the jazz musician Rick "Braun"
i got a license to kill, u still workin on your permit
you gettin laid off, show i'll show your ass how to work it
Disaster means inflicting widespread destruction and distress
you aint perfect
you'll be better if u played chess
i rhyme to impress
i rhyme with finesse
i'm outmaneuverin u dog, capitalizin on your downfalls
i put holes in your toes more than air force ones
messin with me is like dad's fathered by sons
this aint Geico, so why u givin 15 percent?
Christ paid for your soul on the cross, but your done SPENT...

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