True elavation is the deepest seed of contemplation.
A product of relaxation and a closed door to every relation...
to this outside world...closed the door to the boss...
closed the door to the girl...closed the door to tha Land of tha Lost.
Where guns are drawn before tha linez, and Prost...
titutes, ...sell their dimez at cost.
You see, the Journey is unfolded before the inner eye.
Like peels of an onion...the outside is dry.
The best selection belongs to the core.
It's difficult, like picking all the locks to the doors.
It takes some skill...a little bit of elbow grease an' alot of will.
Still, it's worth the patience, an' the reward's worth a Mill'
The body is like that of a car, it lays idle.
Install it's engine, an' the soul plaaays vital...
to the movement...It's a major improvement.
But some of us still drive to school--truant! (ingnorant)
Love is lubrication and it's gassed with desire.
But a mixture of the two...will cause the car to tire.
It is a balanced world...conceptually.
As long as, Tha Linez are Drawn sepe-rately.
See, we need both to drive us like a Rolls.
Without desire we'd never accomplish our goals.
An' without love, our hearts would run dry.
Without it, we'd con a man in the blink of an eye!
An nobody likes a lyar...meritorious of hell-fire.
Casts a heart of stone notoriously drier.
Elavating to the highest level of man...demands control.
Air Supremacy is the ultimate goal!
But, with what is your heart filled?
If not the love of God? Your heart remains ill !!

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Uppinnn!!!

uppin.

wow... I've read some of your other stuff... I like your style .. you have good potential..

Thanx again and again, Angelic. ReeeeUppppiNNN>

uppin...

yo, i like ur style dunny, poetic with the words too....nice drop.

i liked the first Air Suprenecy, and this was a nice sequel...

7/10

P.e.a.c.e.

Thanx 13th,
I peeped your style too. Love tha way you do it. keep it moving>

A product of relaxation and a closed door to every relation...
to this outside world...closed the door to the boss...
closed the door to the girl...closed the door to tha Land of tha Lost.

I really like how that sounded
I really like this whole rhyme, its like one giant meta

PS check out
my newest open mic
"Hooligan X", Id like to get ur opinion on it
sorry to promote it on ur thread,
but peeps are sleepin,thx

Thanx for uppin' 12,
I like your style but you could be more creative without curse and more verse...and yeah heads be sleepin'...like they learned how to write and not how to read...peace..

might not have the same views on God but i agree that this was tight... you got skills... keep rhymin

This joint was wet dogg. Your spits are on fire, you use good vocab. and all the lines flow nicely. Good topic...