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Old 03-21-03, 10:28 AM   #1
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The Crackdown

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THE CRACK EPEDEMIC HITZ THE GHETTO PART OF TOWN//

TOXIC ROCK CHANGED INOCENT LIVES ALL AROUND//

PROMISING TEENS, NOW IN DEEP LEFT TO DROWNED//

GLASS PIPES IN DA GROUND, BREAKING SOUNDBARRIER//

THE MAN IN THE SUIT IS THE PRIMARY CARRIER//

THEY INFESTED THE MINORITY POPULATION WIT A DONATION//

A DEVICE TO DEPRIVE GOOD MEN OF A GOOD LIFE//

HIT AFTER HIT, FREEBASE DAT EASY TO GET A LIFT//

STAY UP AND NEVER COME DOWN, BODY TAKES A SHIFT//

YOU BECOME A MONSTER, STATISTIC IN DA ROSTER//

ACT LIKE PERSON YOU LOVE TO HATE, LOOKIN FOR BAIT//

CLUCKING , YOUR MOTHERS VIDEO TAPES//

BIG SALE, YOU NOW HAVE BECOME A WALE//

I SET SAIL TO HELP YOU ESCAPE DA HAIL//

OF SPEARS, CRACK COCAINE IS NEAR//

YOU STOP FOR A WHILE THEN YOU DISAPPEAR//

HOUDINI CANT ESCAPE THIS WHITE FEAR//

SMOKIN THIS MANUFACTURED DOOM DEVICE//

DAT CAME OUT WHEN POP'S WAS INTO MIAMI VICE//

EARLY EIGHTIES, COBRA LOKES, AND WINSTON SMOKES//

YOU STILL AINT CLOSE TO HIGH HOPES//

TO BUSY FUCKING WIT DA DOPE//

KNEELING TO IT, LIKE IF IT WAS DA POPE//

NECK CLUTCHED BY A TIGHT ROPE, GASPING FOR AIR//

TAKE DA PHYSICAL CHALLENGE IN THIS DOUBLE DARE//

EITHER BE DA DOPE, OR HANG BY YOUR THROAT//

YOU IN DA TITANIC AND HAVE TO CHOOSE A LIFE BOAT//

ONE WITH CRACK AND DA OTHER WIT HIGH HOPES//

CHOOSE ONE AND BE STRONG, LET LIFE CONSOLE YOU//

IMAGINE IF THIS TOXIC ROCK WAS NEVER DISCOVERED//

SO MANY PEACEFUL LIVES WOULD HAVE TOWERED //

TO AN ALL MIGHTY POWER, LOVE AND AFFECTION//

FEEL A NEW SENSATION, IN FRONT OF THE CLASS

READY FOR YOUR PRESENTATION// DREAMS DESTROYED

JUST TO LET US AVOID OUR MINDS DEEP DESIRES//

TO REACH DA HEIRCHY WERE DA EVIL NEVER ASPIRES//

A WHOLE DIFFERENT RACE TO CONTROL AND HAVE POWERS

TO CHANGE THIS REIGN OF FIRE///
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Old 03-21-03, 07:59 PM   #2
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Okay, I noticed you have NO replies to ANY of your shit so I decided to peep this and I see why you have no replies. It's long, there's no flow and the content is repetitive. You bars are too short extend them about 2 syllables longer or so and it should help drastically. Try not to say the same thing practically in each line, have more of random thoughts but on topic. Keep elevatin.

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Old 03-23-03, 05:00 PM   #3
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hey, thanks for your help my friend. i will take that in mind..
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