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Old 03-21-03, 01:09 AM   #1
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Arrow Poetry of Gods

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"Poetry of Gods"

Poetry of Gods, flowin and rhymin, creatin worldwide euphoria,
Spit flows of Power, reminiscent of the Silent Warrior,
Line by line, applyin multitudes of brain,
Writers block adorning thousands, drivin cats insane,
Spittin shit at y'all, quicker than the draw of John Wayne,
Rebellious against life, runnin off the tracks, de-railing the train,
Expanding my mind, apllyin every inch, to maximum gain,
Rhymes of the mind, we expressin the inner thought,
When gold turns to dust, always rely on my cohort,
This is the poetry of the chosen ones, examplin thoughts of the genii
Labelled as the rappin deity, worshipers at my feet, but why?
Protested my position in the hierachy of this phenomena,
Like LL said, its somethin like a............

The day, pen goes to pad and nothin flows to mind,
Will be the day that I die, like Clipse, I'ma always grind,
Rhymers of the real and raw talents today are a rare find,
Skillz showin this world why the preachers speard his word,
Took years of this to elevate my shit to be heard,
God given talents, only spread at the time of birth,
Chosen to represent the illest flows 'n' dominate this Earth,
Rappin on, the poetry of Gods, to always elevate,
Stickin in this shit, blessin me with the peace of mind state,
Following on the ways of God, never cease to create,
Droppin bombs on rb, like Bush'll do to Kuwait,
Rappin forever, givin us oppurtunity to express opinion,
Sites like rb, becomin the chosen ones dominion,
The Poetry of Gods, providin euphoria worldwide,
Samplin our feelings in this style of expression, to y'all I cry out my pride....

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Old 03-21-03, 02:03 AM   #2
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*speechless*
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Old 03-21-03, 02:16 AM   #3
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pretty good, not feelin the dragonball z tho dawg
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Old 03-21-03, 03:44 AM   #4
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^^^ its a sig... hate to break it to ya but you're not supposed to be commenting on the sig... focus on whats above it... anyays how can you not get it? you about as deep as a kiddies pool...
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Old 03-21-03, 03:46 AM   #5
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that piece comes close to a masterpiece, dogg that seriously was ill .. 'tight like a tiger', u name it, had good flow.. showin the ppl on rb wat the K.I is about, keep spittin dogg
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Old 03-21-03, 11:02 PM   #6
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Yo, lets not be sleepin here doggs ^^^^^!!!
Lookin for constructive criticism, praise and advice, all that!!!
Do not sleep!!!!

Peace Out Yo!!!
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Old 03-21-03, 11:20 PM   #7
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pretty good man, pretty good... I was feeling the concept, no doubt... hot vocab, pretty good rhymes yeah... and the flow was straight...
"Line by line, applyin multitudes of brain,
Writers block adorning thousands, drivin cats insane,"
^yeah I know what that shit's about, you read my last post right... lol...

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Old 03-22-03, 10:22 AM   #8
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mead that shit was hot
droppin knowledge and an extended vocab
good shit

feeling these lines...

Poetry of Gods, flowin and rhymin, creatin worldwide euphoria,
Spit flows of Power, reminiscent of the Silent Warrior,
Line by line, applyin multitudes of brain,
Writers block adorning thousands, drivin cats insane,
Spittin shit at y'all, quicker than the draw of John Wayne,

keep writin
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Old 03-23-03, 04:41 AM   #9
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^^^^Uppin for more looks yo, thanx for the comments

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