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fell off in da club looking so damn clean/
eyes low and I'm smelling like a pound of green/ scope tha area just to see what I could see/ and find out which one of these hoe's comming wit me/ so I proceed to make my way over to tha bar/ but something caught my eye best looking gurl by far/ she had caramel skin wit some round shaped tities/ and a ass that made a nigga want to dance like diddy/ but naw really did'nt even know what's in store/ how wuz i gonna know that I wuz fuckin wit a hor/ later on tha next day I decide to give her a call/ asked her out to a movie but I just wanted them draws/ and now I'm done that's all I wanted that's that's/ but tha pussy wuz so good it keep a nigga comming back/she was feeding a nigga and doing me right/ luv is blind you cant turn a hoe into a housewife/ I felt that was my pussy, that was my head/ I'm feeling like dru hill somebody sleeping in my bed/ never knew cuz I aint tha one to catch feelings/ no idea that tha pussy would have me illing/ I come over for a suprise visit/ but somthing is foul this situation smells shitty/ she said she would'nt cheat on me.... what am i thinkin/ I guess my babby in here sleeping I'll just creep in/ aint this a bitch I cant belive what a nigga seeing/ I'm in a rage like I been took over by a demon/ sit down bitch this aint no time to push and shove/ but when I cam 2 I'm standing in a pool of blood/ all I remember is me puting a choke on him/ I cant belive this shit just happen I killed both off them/ broke down on my knees cuz i knew that shit was'nt right / but I'm paying for it now looking at 25 to life/ |
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this was all of tha dome tell me if you feel it or not
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u started it off hot
the middle was aight but u couldve done a lil mo work on ikt but its coo this reminds me of a song by Nas |
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i wasnt really feeling this topic... i've seen it done more than a few times... it was alright but you lost points in the creativity section... i give it a 6/10... keep rhymin
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