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sit back, i got a story to tell, listen well/
its about how a young boys life crashed and fell/
lets call him Mark, now Mark was a regular kid/
everything he did was unspectacular, no secrets hid/
but there was this bully, lets call him Tom, Tom was strong/
he used to punch and kick Mark, spark him all break long/
he was the lunch money stealing type, tougher than dykes/
the type to pick up a half-brick and rough up your bike/
so every week Mark is coming home with a black eye/
and his parents are asking "what happened?", he just cracked lies/
like "oh i was clumsy, the door opened sudddenly/
its doesnt hurt, oh i gotta sit, my knees are feeling rubbery"/
see Mark was a pacifist and a nice guy to boot/
he put up with bashing-fists, smashing-hits and boots/
he threw up a smile to avoid revealing his feelings/
maybe whinced a few times when his body was healing/
anyhow, one day he got the rose-tinted vision/
on this girl he just noticed and suddenly he was wishin'/
to position himself close to her, talk and boast to her/
maybe get her name and number and just coast to her/
so as Mark walks to this girl and starts a conversation/
2 minutes later he hears the call "get out of the way son!"/
Tom shoves past the kid, gives him another abrasion/
and right there is where, Mark starts to lose his patience/
see, he didnt reallt give a fuck 'bout taking a beating/
being being humilated in public had his anger heating/
now Marks yelling out loud "stop, you dick!/
i've had enough of your bullshit, come here you prick!"/
and he swings, its like all frustraition has come out at once/
he connects and this bully barely stomach the punch/
he doubles up with a rubber gut, and now its tough luck/
coz Mark's temper snapped this guy is getting fucked up/
it takes three teachers to break up the fight/
rage had faded, now Marks crying at this shake to his life/
his parents are yelling at him for defending himself/
hes thinking "fuck if i hadnt stopped i couldve ended his health"/
hes quaking coz he knows Toms gonna get him back/
so the next day he goes to the kitchen, straight to the knife rack/
and sneaks a blade into his jacket pocket, hopoing against hope/
that he can get through the day without going against rope/
no such fortune, hes barely stepped foot in a classroom/
when he feels a hand grabbing his neck, pulling him back through/
and knock him off his feet, its Tom wanting pay back/
wanting to beat Mark until his eyes glaze black/
but Mark aint stupid, hes already reaching/
as he falls, he pulls Tom down to cushion his beating/
the problem is as Tom and Mark both falls to the ground/
the knife is only half out and the point is still down/
theres a ripping noise and Tom finds himself covered in blood/
he realises its not his, looks down, discovers the wood/
the knife handle sticking out of Mark, the weapon he brung/
is now forcefully stung ointo his fucking right lung/
he gurgles like a baby, Tom screams and panics/
acting manic with guilt, he tries to reach and grab it/
and pull it out, next problem, it opens the cut up/
and now 30 kids are witnessing a ruck gone fucked up/
by the time the ambulance arrives, Mark had died/
and Tom is left with his fingerprints on every knife side/
hes so stressed his visions turning gray hes thinking "fuck this"/
theres no stopping the kid as the blade touched wrist/
so trust this, theres a lesson here if you listen clear/
that karmas a bitch a bitch to deal with when its ugly head rears/
so leanr from Tom and Mark and dont make the same mistakes/
the breaks aint easy, believe me, whatever the stakes/

long arsed stopry i worte about 2 weeks ago, feedback?