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Old 03-23-03, 09:35 PM   #1
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a freestyle

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YO I SWING HAMMAS AND I AIN'T TALKIN BOUT THAT SHIT YOU HIT NAILS WIT/I'M TALKIN BOUT THAT SHIT YOU TOTE AND SWEEP A THE STREETS WIT/ THAT SAME SHIT THAT'LL MAKE HARD NIGGAS WEAK IN THE KNEES/ AND MAKE GROWN ASS MEN LOOK LIKE THEY PRIMITIVE SWINGIN FROM TREES/THATS THE KINDA THANG THAT'LL PLAY SPOILER TO ANY MANS PARTY/THAT THING THATS KNOW IN STREETS AS GHETTO KARATE/THAT THING THE COPS SWING WHEN YOU TRY TO RUN/THAT SAME THAT KILLED PAC AND BIG ONE BY ONE/YOU THINK YOU BAD FOR SWINGIN THEN HAMMAS/ WHEN I YOU DO IS CAUSE POLICE TO HAVE USE FO THEW CAMERAS
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Old 03-23-03, 10:19 PM   #2
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Re: a freestyle

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YO I SWING HAMMAS AND I AIN'T TALKIN BOUT THAT SHIT YOU HIT NAILS WIT/I'M TALKIN BOUT THAT SHIT YOU TOTE AND SWEEP A THE STREETS WIT/ THAT SAME SHIT THAT'LL MAKE HARD NIGGAS WEAK IN THE KNEES/ AND MAKE GROWN ASS MEN LOOK LIKE THEY PRIMITIVE SWINGIN FROM TREES/THATS THE KINDA THANG THAT'LL PLAY SPOILER TO ANY MANS PARTY/THAT THING THATS KNOW IN STREETS AS GHETTO KARATE/THAT THING THE COPS SWING WHEN YOU TRY TO RUN/THAT SAME THAT KILLED PAC AND BIG ONE BY ONE/YOU THINK YOU BAD FOR SWINGIN THEN HAMMAS/ WHEN I YOU DO IS CAUSE POLICE TO HAVE USE FO THEW CAMERAS



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Old 03-24-03, 12:18 AM   #3
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chino xl practics gun fu, this kat ghetto karate. never seen imagery presented the same way you did with this. your punches were devloped but odd. either or stay up and keep evolvin

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Old 03-24-03, 08:24 AM   #4
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.Pretty Whack.

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Hey kid, this joint didn't make all that much sense. The lines were all fucked up, other lines didn't match or make sense, you didn't really have a point to this shit. It was whack, straight up... you need to improve dunny.
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Old 03-24-03, 08:09 PM   #5
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dawg you fail to overstand the style because you only look to understand the words when you evolve to a level of more of a peotic feelin in that u just spit what eva is comin to mind and expressing yourself in was that are more complex then just similes metaphor and otamotopeas and start to develop a more outside the box train of thought you can criticize me

and now thats some real shit this ain't no game education is what you should strive for because no one can take it a way all of these skills can be taken away in many ways so please come wit a better criticism then that was wack and didn't make sense please give more insight
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