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Old 04-04-03, 11:35 PM   #1
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First song off A2Z's first album "XYZ" Called "ALL NIGHTER"

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Aight, this is everyones favorite MC A2Z with my debut song off my first album "XYZ" Hit me back and tell me what u think. dont bull shit me... tell me how to make it better holla




All Nighter

Mic check 1,2
Uh..uh.. InFumUz

My eyes are fucking sore, I wanna go to sleep//
But something burns inside of me… something down deep//
Something that’s keep saying “Fuck it Z, write it.”//
But I can’t catch the words like a catcher without a mitt//
So I sit here, stare at my pad, thumb in my ass//
And I just start to cry… mentally bomb myself with tear gas//
But then it fucking hits me… I start to hear the flow//
I yank out my pain, start to write, and let all my stress go//

HOOK:
Words are my escape-my weapon-my obsession//
They let out all my stress—my anger—my aggression//
They let me rap things I wouldn’t even say in daylight//
Cause in the world of rap—it don’t matter that I’m white//
(Repeat)

Cuz what you fools don’t realize is that this is my escape//
It takes a foolish white boy—it’s a fucking change of shape//
Do I wanna be Eminem—not in this lifetime//
I just do me—grab a mic—and let my self rhyme//
Its just drives me to the edge—driving me insane//
I could end it all right now—a bullet to my brain//
No I couldn’t do that this verse ain’t finished yet//
Imma scream this shit, scream it loud—I’M WHITE AND PROUD OF IT//

HOOK

When I think of this oppression—this obsession with a white jam session//
I’ll do what every other MC did—survive natural selection//
I gotta give props to Em fucka he paved the way//
He made it okay for a white MC to say what he wants to say//
Cuz my skills every day grows larger—its like Britneys tits//
My house, my car, damn my cash muthafucka you can have it//
Cuz I can slit my wrists with words—lyrically pick up a knife//
Cuz I live to rhyme—I rhyme to live- RAPPING IS MY LIFE//

Hook
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InFumUz muthafucka
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Old 04-04-03, 11:43 PM   #2
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yo this wasn't to bad. the topic was pretty good. lyrics weren't to bad. one thing i would suggest is try usin more multis. also it seemed you had an aa bb rhyme scheme through the song. other than that its all good. also, i'm a soulja? what exactly does that mean? do i get any cool prizes or anythin?
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Old 04-04-03, 11:46 PM   #3
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yo, givin me props dawg? tru
yo, sh*t was nice playa
keep it uppin
im a have a hard time judgin this cuz theres no audio, not that my comp could handle the audio ne way, lol
but the lyrics is hot, jus hope that its spit rite
im out
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Old 04-05-03, 02:08 AM   #4
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What the fuck, this is Audio man, post this in Open Mic, see what the catsin there have to see, your jst wasting views of people who actually post their AUDIO SONGS on here....

Peace Out Yo!!!!
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Old 04-05-03, 09:52 AM   #5
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dawg we need to write a song i think itd be off da hook ight hit me back playa o ya the song was fuckin great and shit and the aa bb scheme worked out so fuck a ll dat PEACE
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Old 04-06-03, 06:20 PM   #6
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LMFAO...Herb.
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