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Old 03-05-03, 06:44 PM   #1
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Stay Strong

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Stay Strong

as i fight the darkness in the shadows of the night/
im blind to see without any of my sight/
fear doesn't affect the inner soul of my fate/
cause i got the power to internaly retaliate/
i take what i got in my siezing reach/
securing with integrity; honor; hones-ty/
so be strong, never be weak/
or be tricked and taken, straight into defeat/
in the state of mind, you can fight the evil/
that huants the good, the young, the beautiful/
i got the power to overthrow my enslaved demon/
to bring the soul assassin its granted freedom/

now like i said in this rhyme/
so when i say this quoted, "Life Will Go On"/
you can't be weak, you have to Stay Strong.

Inspired by Tupac Amaru Shakur
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Old 03-05-03, 06:59 PM   #2
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flow wuz aight. sounded mo like a poem than a verse. keep droppin so i can figure yo style out better. keep workin on yo rhymes and keep up dawg.
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Old 03-05-03, 07:03 PM   #3
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nursery rhyme poem flow...... need to elevate..... room for improvement
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Old 03-27-03, 01:06 AM   #4
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hell yea, this shit sucked
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Old 03-27-03, 01:19 AM   #5
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man one shot y you always talkin shit?
the leader of a known crew that sucks dick
and still, you havent even battled anyone yet
you bitched out to me and suey
thats wack dog, were both newbies
so get off the shit talk bitch
go suck a dick one shot hit
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