|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
03-27-03, 02:55 AM
|
#1
|
||||||
|
Guest
|
j
IP: ABE5 5A5C
j
Last edited by JTRIX : 08-15-03 at 06:19 PM. |
||||||
|
|
03-27-03, 05:53 AM
|
#2
|
||||||
|
Guest
|
IP: 072B 152E
erm dont kno wat to say. it flowed aight but ya first few lines just not really that funny... sorry but it just felt lazy then. as for the rest of it it flowed well and ya vocab was quite good but did ya have any direction wen writin it? maybe i just missed it. anyway check mine shinobi life aight later
|
||||||
|
|
|
03-27-03, 07:22 PM
|
#3
|
||||||
|
Guest
|
IP: ABE5 5A5C
Thanx a lot
|
||||||
|
|
 |
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
