first to 5 3 ko
10 bar max
100 post strong to vote


i'mma drop in a bit


G'luck

i'mma call ya rtikulit,dats howu pronounce it, so check it..



whats riduculous, childish and tick-u-lish?
bars been read by the so call claimed author
rtikulit..
matter of fact i'll lay each punch down fo you and let'chu "pick-a-lick"..
i flow so tight it seemed like i'm a virgin dat never thought about "dick to a chick"
onlyway u winnin is if u copywright, and let me find out.. and watch me throw a stick where you shit..
(confused) ass crack, u dumb bitch/

befo i even finish, he gone be filing papers to sue..but pick back up yo keys nicca,"my word is da truth"..
and admit,"u just got into hip-hop, ever since u seen 50 cent interview in the booth"../(mtv)

u couldnt come off at me hard even if you nutted at da beggining..den turned around and busted 2 mo at thee ending..
take a look at yo crew "dawg", they aint intelligent they just pretending..
what-eva i find good out ur lil ass robot click, i post dat up "dawg" to get sum bidding/

and i knew u wuzz pussy cuz when i entered, u wuz in da corner shaking like butt-naked cold in december.. u prolly cried when u seen da death of "Simba".. so i'mma stop beatin yo ass like a public deffender/

Simba: lion king dude

im just now seeing this..but 10bars..you mean 10 lines??

It doesnt matter..let me key something

whateva man, just make sure ur verse be as the length of mines...

-1-

--Niro's *mentally in chains*, no harm from 'love taps' his verse owns da user title CLINICALLY INSANE...--
--dissolvin pixels like a television wit ya ENERGY REFRAMED, demon's got his 'manhood at stake'...now his IDENITY IN SHAME...--
--Niro's 'too proud to lose to rtik...punches make him PRETEND TO BE REMAINS...--
--Niro's 'parallel to his location...rtik have em SENT TO BE RETAINED, KOs da begginin and ya END's TO BE REGAINED...--
--'violent pain recepters engage' when jaws drop like u in a LOST FOR WORDS...like 'toddler comprehension' i might as well TOSS YA VERSE...--
i stand alone..Niro's chances of winnin are like a richman's STANCE ON LOANS...--
--this kid gettin hollow tips for his prom date....bullets make him DANCE WIT CHROME...--
--Niro's a mental disorder...wit a TRANCE ON HIS DOOM, u jugglin dicks like happy clowns...explain his FANS WELL KNOWN...--
--ya verse like 'hungry squirrels goin nuts'...u aint BUSTIN SHIT...grillin probes like barbeque CUTTIN RIBS..--
--Niro's on a 'foreign navigation' like takin RUSSIAN TRIPS, u 'throwin punches' but like *lil dick to pussy*..NOTHIN HITS!!!...--

upp upp away!!

rtikulate gets the vote
cant b bothered to explain but de niro ur gettin better from ur older shit keep it up

rtikulate won because his verse was just overall stronger. you started off strong. de Niro, but it looked like u lost it after the first few lines. keep it up.

hey Niro. return the favor dawg and vote on my battle with Rtikulate::: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=35971

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