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HATERS NUMBER ONE
IP: 200C EEF2
Dis ryhme is dedicated to all the haters in my area n class, fuck yous.
Opener: I aint a saint never said i wasant a sinner/ dont have to ...rap..snort smack..fuck hoes..and play mister winner like you cats wanna speak shit/ but ya front yall actin weak its like u cats spit to tackle fame/ spreading news bout me..buildin my banner in shame but you know da pain i can bring you/ spread my words like anthrax...dis a chemical warfare...on a mission to kill you i aint a dog...dont judge me by a cover/ im a soulja from my pain RIP to my brother n father/LORD LET EM rest in da hall of FAME bitch...ass...punks....wouldn't know reign when it came/ speak behind my back betta front for d attack/ fucking your life up on smack..crack....dope...hope you die you fuckin cats In da class you speak like ya ILL/ fronting like ya GOD on a mission to milk me...but will..you ever see da truth behind THE:...your not me......... Miss beauty pagent...Mr i'm so trip....trying to hit on da ladies....with ya so called dick/ Excuse me Miss too good..heres a question....for first place in da BEAUTY PAGENT/ what would you do ...for DA world if ya ASS could/ WELL UMMMMM THROW A PARTY JUST FOR ME...SHOPPING SPREE...FUCK EVERYTHING I SEE....FINGER MYSELF WHEN I PEE....BE QUEEN OF DA SCHOOL....OH AND WORLD PEACE IS THAT COOL/ dont ever try to be my friend/ in a lifetime hope ya dreams fail ahead/ to words that yall spread/ you got a "F" cause ya failed in giving head/ dead last in dis race wit all ya friends FOR MY STRUGGLES N SUICIDAL FEARS/ TOO MY CHEMICAL IMBALANCE BRINGING ME TEARS DIS WORLD IS A PLANET OF HATERS/ I'VE SEEN MY HURT...PAIN...N COURAGE THROUGH MY AGES/ but you fucks belong in a cage...you all front with dis fake ass rage but if yall could step..back...put down da crack..fucken wacks..strapped with a dildo no gat..look at yourself in da mirror/ YOU BE STARRING INTO DA EYES OF FAKE ASS KILLER CLOSER respect to mark linda n D/pedtro love all for respecting me/MARK FUCK THESE HATERS/THOU BE DEVIL CREATORS/LETS UNLESS DA POWER/LETS HELL RAIN AND SHOWER..... MA FOR ALL YA GIVEN STRENGTH HELPING ME FIGHT MY CHEMICAL IMBALANCE/LUCKY TO HAVE YOU AND MY NUMBER ONE ILLEST GIRL L LUCIOUS LOUSIE...HUGZ FOR STICKING BY ME...BUBS J YOU NEVER BELIEVE DA TRUTH FUCK ALL THESE RUMORS..BELEIVE WHAT YA WANT...DONT TALK SHIT N DONT FRONT/ YOUR PUSSY JUST A HOLE THEN YA AVERAGE CUNT To da lord my heart is wit you...THANKYOU Last edited by lillem : 03-30-03 at 05:28 AM. |
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IP: 072B 152E
ya gotta split this up into readable bars man cos it just looks messy and ya get the flow mixed up wen readin it. wat i could understand was nice tho good delivery in genral but a few lines need work. nice overall tho maybe work on ya vocab tho
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IP: 200C EEF2
Need some responds.
Holla peoples |
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
yeah i was feeling what ur tryin to say but like the cat above sed u cud do with making it easier to read
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IP: 5153 3B92
word...i was feelin it....hard to read but i managed....stay up....1
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IP: 5119 B006
JUst had to redo dis cause it was fucking my mind...People have already gave me news on dis...
but holla at da slight changes.. |
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