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Narcelus Flawless
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Interplanetary (prophecies)
IP: C3D0 66BD
eternal struggle, juggle the rubble, subtle rebuttles/
the puzzles and tunnels, thrust us in shuttles like verses in hubbles/ the longer the distance Narcicyst increases with harsh verocity/ marveling varcity, masterin archery, debachery, aim for your arteries/ disarming your armory, stomping your monarchy, turning scenes into bloody mahogony/ the ghosts are haunting me, but the vengence after the ritcheous slain/ trying to fight the pain, while i annihilate and hibernate/ a cyanide gernade stronger than chemicals in a molotov/ larger than autobans, while i remain in this octogan/ inside museums, seen by the weakest heathens of deakens/ releasing a secret deep and for selfish reasons while facing demons/ the speech is a theorum, point of no return, courting the overture/ avoiding the tortured verb, i'm enjoying the morbidity your soul deserves/ my force of words, kept in the temple of Emmanual/ passively gradual, i resemble the prophet Samuel/ i take trips Oversees, just to see how many mcs, can possibly br ready to spit with prophecy/ i go hard in the text, to intercept each and every last one of you mafuckas dissin my intellect... |
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Guest
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I liked your rhyming scheme... you used un common words... nice work uppin for you
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Narcelus Flawless
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IP: C3D0 66BD
thanks and good lookin out...one
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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nice multies... I didn't really like the flow, but it was a good verse for practicin' a specific element of rhyme... (multi's)... the vocab was pretty tight as well..
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Narcelus Flawless
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IP: C3D0 66BD
thanks for the feedback dunny...one
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