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Old 04-01-03, 11:38 AM   #1
Mexicoz shorty
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2nd post in here tell me what u think

IP: F886 A704

I'm Mexican yes this is true/
Please dont mistake me for being a jew/
My rhymes might suck ass/
But I swear on my mamma I didn't write them when i was high off grass/
I've been in this freestyle shit for a while/
I just saw 8mile/
Some peeps there couldn't rap fo' shit/
So I sparked up and didn't let anyone else get a hit/
This rhyme was made on April 1st/
I'm not a posser, not like Fred Durst/
Kid Rock I hate him too/
Fuckin trailer trash "hey kid rock fuck you!"/
I'm sick of white people tryin' to freestyle/
Sayin' they was rappin since they was a child/
It dont matter the white boy that can spit/
Is Eminem, have you seen 8mile he was playin' wit that girls tit/

Peace out~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Also if you can please comment on this and tell me what you think. If you can give me advise for making my raps better please tell me them and I would really appreciate them.
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"Mexicoz Shorty"
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