yo 20 to 30 lines, no hate votes, no crew votes post your shit in an hour fuck it you can go home and write your shit you need all the help you can get ill give you 24 hours




yo yo im takin white rap and verbally-attackin-him/ and thankin god im not herbishly-wack-like-him/ he's lackin-trim/ and hes white so say im crackin-slim/ like a blood hound im trackin-him/and im my flow this cat-will-swim/ his crew is literally backin-him/ and in the sack-they-rim/ yo dyke-go-home cause there can only be one king of this microphone/ you bite like a ryhme-clone so ima scatter you in different time-zones/ after i rip apart your cells-and-bones/ your body parts can call each other on telephones/ find ya blind cause i smell-cologne/ manual excells-alone and ill never sell-my-thron/ im the biggest name in online rap its well-known/ while you cant even spell-your-own/ punch me, and i can tell-like-hell-your groan/ break your fist cuz my words have a hard shell-like-stone/ lyrically make you dwell-in-my-cyclone/say farwell-to-this-home/ cuz when i yell-disses-youll-be-blown/to knew heights where punch misses-are-unknown/ i piss-on-this-gnome/ and leave white rap to reminisce-and-moan/

now that's what i'm talkin about...some skills shown...this is tight, don't post any more garbage though...peace...

uppin for this pussys lyrics ill give him time to WRITE his lyrics bitch ass

Aight, I neva freeze on the micrpphone, its not my fault yo girl left u alone.// Listen I aint like u, I dont prewrite my shit, and im not like u befo sex i dont jack off my dick.// 9 millis blazein paths through the streets, you be an unsigned wanksta tryin to create new beats, you obsolete mothafucka, you midaswell die- cry, cuz when I come up to flow I stop yo fuckin joy ride.// Im whirpool and yo the damn tide, you said you had skill but its not right to lie.// You best go to sleep and not wake up till next week, hata dirty masturbator, layin at home lookin at pornographic screen saver.// Fuck of bitch, you aint notin comapre to me, eat chips and lay yo fat ass around lookin at the tv, instead you take rhymes off Mp3's and pretend the shits yours.// You get so much dick that your a dirty man hore.// Horror, blood and guts, its what they see on the crime scene its not frome me they from you and yo mamas cryin, "I wish he could have anotha chance.", but he ran his mouth too much he should of stuck to dance.// Hard blows is all I use, I got talent Ill use it, wont abuse it, lose my self in the music and than its ova.// I kill you like a tank goin against a monsta truck Im eminem you Everlast, and im the one screamin i juss dont give a fuck.// Butsted up yo jaw, but than again dawg I give you credit becuz you have enough gull to go against me. I bench press about 320, while you bench press the shit my brother in pre school does- see u lil bitch you dont eccel at notin but givin head, I rounded off wit gats now u punk lil ass is layin out dead.// I really dont care how many lines you said I could use, ill use um all if I want to what the fuck you gonna do.// And than again your words dont have hard shell like anything, you probably white too walkin round sayin, "Hey dude check out my bling bling.// I know thats how u talk, but dont spock about shit, callin me a dyke actually yo moms the dyke who didnt pay me last night.// And you aint got a throne, the only throne you got is the kid wit the smallest bone.// See ima original gangsta wit a dangerous mind, fuck B manual and his gay has lines.// Ya'll think he has skill maybe he does but thats juss becuz he raps when hes buzzed, im hazein on u punk ass motha fuckas, aight I think i used up all the lines, but if anyone is dumb its me for wastin my lines.// Aight dawg come out from unda yo bed no need to cry, if u win thats bullshit if anything we should tie.// Im betta and you know so admit it, im done and ova wit, cuz yo styles is fo kittens.// I juss blazed yo ass wit no prewrittin, fuck battlein and yo dance stick to flyin yo kite.// Fuck off bitch cuz yo shit bites.!!

lookin fo votes.

uppin for votes

my vote goes too whie rap..he had a better verse..manual..hw you gonna say white rap has no skills..when ya verse sucked..if anyone..i say you have no skill

whatever kid uppin for votes

thanx ritikulate, lookin fo some mo votes

uppin

vote - B
he took it in every part
u should both write in bars tho like 1 bar=1 drum beat
itl help u get ur sylables right and its easier to read
B got good potential tho, all those multis actually hitting, u should go 4 sum more wordplay tho
and definatly write in bars
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yo thanks for the feedback man, i understand what you mean ill try that next time and work on it, thanks score tied 1 to 1 and still uppin for votes

uppin for some votes you vote my battle and ill vote on your battle

uppin for some damn votes no sleepin

Your both going to get slept on.

I'm not fucking reading that. Look at how long that is. You think I'm wasting time on reading that? Learn how to do shit, make it like 10-15 lines.