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Old 04-03-03, 06:14 AM   #1
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Lost Love

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you make me forget the torment,
that distorted my image of friendship
as the trends shift i wish more and more to end it
but i can't afford to mend this pretentious wound...


Your amounted faith helped me find my place among the planet
No more lunch with panic,in the shadows of a dungeons granite
You've shown me the light of day,
So,sacrificing my night for your smile is a small price to pay
Especially,for the slight exchange of your joyful winding fist
Finding its destination in a primal myst of happyness
Staring at a glowing lamp as times golden sands expand
Memories of holding hands
When it was cold and damp
Candle flames would boldly stand on their only strand of hope
While jot down the random notes that expand to coat
this wonderful subject,
I'm working towards acheiving keeping a promise
I promised to be honest
And so far that parts accomplished
This is far from lust of a common kiss
This is the love that exists but remains amiss
from the trains of bliss,
Which makes me glad we found our own means of transportation that day....
A year and 3 months later
That day...well,that day is far from vague,
Watching stars ablaze in the haze of the night
Staying up talking until the rays of light
Are grazing our sight,
Its quite amazing right?
What about the way you hold your white pillow?
The way you embrace it tight,
Slightly turned facing right
Did you know you sleep with a peaceful face
That never leaves its place like it percieved its grace
And believed thats its purpose was to surface
for me to cherish like a blatant relic
That portrays angelic...portrays angelic
I intend to give you my highest commitments end
like scientists trying to apprehend the velocity of a descending feather
At last,love is in my grasp,and i'll clasp to this forever
I've always cherished the precious moments we spend together
I remember sitting by the shore
to see what the distant malignant weather had in store
I adore your pure facial expressions
When my humor makes it impression
Your laughter is a contagious infection
that creates a euphoric extention to my felictious existance
Your ambitiousness has changed me for a greater cause
I have admiration for the inspiration you've given
You've also made my life worth living
Even through the toughest times
Your touch can find a way to make goosebumps move up my spine
I appreciate the fact you'll wake up late
to massage my back or head until the slight pains
of migraines no longer remain
Your the architect that rebuilt my crumbled pride
Your the only person that can bring a blush to my humble side
I've let the water works of your jumbled eyes
Tumble dry on my shoulder,
until your face was the beholder of a marvelous smile
Your love has become an enormous portion of my soul
Its forced me to grow
I was hoping to end this war of emotions
But your love has conquered and claimed
both sides of my brain while their backs where turned brawling like brutes...
But then again...
Not even zero gravity could stop me from falling for you....
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Old 04-03-03, 11:00 AM   #2
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uppin this one...
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Old 04-03-03, 11:04 AM   #3
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werd up

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yo that was pretty dope...i like how u threw that shit in like that cuz not to many ppl be spittin shit like that that was some real shit keep it up....

~keep it real~
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Old 04-03-03, 11:08 AM   #4
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thanks for the feedback dunny...always keepin shit real yo...respect
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Old 04-03-03, 03:36 PM   #5
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hell yea

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hell yea thats what its all about son always keep it dat real...
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Old 04-03-03, 04:26 PM   #6
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I liked this drop, a new topic seen in the open mic....

the topic was coo and you kept to it...

keep writting
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