these provacitive photoages, zodiac killers incursion this/
serving is learning tapes, so i study before battles occurin/
these shackles are hurting, the arms of the faculty are burnin/
you couldnt escape from these clutches or tackle the current/
take a plunge into the depths of this crystal lake, and untamed waters/
and get you brain slaughtered by the character played by Cain Harter/
and stomp foes with sound pros, to reach this rage i block your tubes like i'm Melvin the South Hoe/
minortary funds is a slave, and not seeking a pretty fortune/
an animal uncaged, known for taking families like war redden borders/
with your shitty portraits, your not comeptitive you peasants that wanna battle me/
you mc's to me are like virgins to Elizabeth Bathery/
unleash the corners within me like Dadeous Cassidy/
and raise the death on all humanity with random casualties/
here is why your operation was sadly a failure/
cuz yah bite then suck like yall was Vlad the Impaler/
i study in depth the psychosis of killers examing their sources/
test me and i'm coming with deep maniacle forces/
casting more spells, incredible pennicles for tell/
the only future for you and your crew are tales of Horrorville...

uppin this one too....

nice... you got some sick multi skill.. serious.. some good play on names/ words in there too.. you need to work on structure of the inner rhyme, your flow suffers from out of place words here and there.....

could you reply to my spit "Why?"

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thanks for that feedback dunny..no doubt i will check your shit and tell you what i think...one

yo, sup man, yo kid nice spit, for real, like my man said, you got sick multies... hot wordplay, but the flow could have been better...
I was feeling this man... like an 7.5/10 to me...

peace