im bored so got this beat on and im jus lettin my feelins go bout some shit


I feel like im drownin in a pool of my own perception
its my growin devotion to try and find lone perfection
got me showin emotion but stuck in a zoned obsession
cant beleive any praise cuz i see in each tone deception
will my beliefs keep me caged or will i see my own affection

OH God Damn
I Need to Release this doubt and let these diseases out!
Cuz

I know its got to change, i need to stand up,scream and stop my brain
cuz i will not be shamed,by knowin i let my dreams get dropped by chains
that wrap and rip my throat, til i try and let go then spit I choke
damn yall this shits no joke, most dreams die in time so i grip my hold
and try to trust myself, but the chains dig deep til the cuts are felt
man look at whats been dealt, i got the skill but still cant bust the shell
or get me out this cage, even praise gave but still theres doubt and rage
I need to let it go, to flow like dirty water through mexico

Oh God Damn
I Wont Beleive in these deamons tryin to hold this being


wit dreams of exposin minds, i wont quit this shit cuz i know that im
skilled wit explosive rhymes, and i know ill grow to blow in time!!!!!




damn after finishin this shit...........and readin it over .....ahh fuck it....holla back

Nice keystyle,decent vocab there.I wuz feelin tho it kinda drifted off sum parts.Stay ^
-Avi

yeah i didnt really like it to much after i read it.....i couldnt even realize my self that its supposed to be bout my self doubt and how ive been chokin lately.........the chain i speak of if peepz dont understand is my metaphorical self doubt

damn i ripp into alot a katz peices on this bitch......and when i feel i dropp one subpar to my usual(seein its keystyled).......still cant get noone to come in talkin shit on it...........holla back yall let me know what ya feel bout this shit....Why do katz only reply when i drop a rhyme i really put alot of effort it

yo what up,
yo man, for a keystyle this shit was pretty good, I was feeling the flow, shit had rhythm... I liked your concept too... yo if you could've mad a longer verse about this, with that same flow and stronger vocab.... shit would have been really hot... no doubt...

Peace

^thankx man.........damn i must be worse at keystyles then i thought......hahahhaha.........i drop a written n get 25 replies and key shit up and get 2.......hahhaa

shit was an aiight keystlye, i liekd the lines before the break,the second part i wasnt feelin as much,but still shit was nice,you should build on it in a written,itd turn out tight...
bismillah

Not trying to put you down or anything, but I wasn't feeling it. It seems like you almost know what you want to say but can't quite get it out. Perhaps you should go back through and just spend some time with this one and work it up. Keep droppin' 'em tho.