a yo, check it out.......


i got displaced anger/
some say displaced danger/
the white kid at da park shootin at the ranger/
best best belive that i aint fuckin wit ya/
when i roll by wit da glocks/
ya moms'll be duckin wit ya/
if i dont like it, then im a kill it/
then pass it to senic ,yo hes goin drill it/
and pass it to duce and hes goin grill it/
i'll fuck u up wit my freestyle/
so u best like my fuckin style/
but u, shit u been rappin since u seen 8 mile/
when i battle u, i'll knock u to the ground/
and if u get up/
then i'll have to knock u back down/
yeah bitch, im sayin /
that even though im prayin/
ill still leave dead in the steets layin/
i just dont give a fuck/
and if u think thats a sin, i'll say it again/
I JUST DONT GIVE A FUCK/
and i mean it/
best belive it/
youll see it/
when i hold up the nine then i sqeeze it........

HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA...........another bullshit ass self promotin regurgitated 90s bullshit rap.........kid ya style and ya manz r worthless........yall got no skill at this shit.......do know what multies, metas, wordplay, punches , rhyme scheme, similies or any real lyrical aspect of this shit besides tryin to rhyme.........ya suck give it up......or learn and elevate like a muthafucka

Exactly..

"soldier" drop your attitude, or leave...Don't be the disease of RB.

fuk man........bruklor do you ave to fukk up every open mic sess. on ere?

p.s:nice pics blood

Wow!

I Feel Dumber For Reading That........ Thank You.
You Absolutely Have NO Wordplay, Metas, Similies, Or Punch-Lines.

What Are You Doing Here??

aye yo
you cant flow
thas how i feel got beef?battle me
play soldier

blitz...shut the fuck up...you ...

i think thas wen u started

lmao^

dude does need a lil help tho

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wen i first read his uhh.."freestyle"...i thought of the "bad side" of doctor suess or sumthin hehe....

wow
dude dont be another slim shady wannabe
peeps hate that more then anything
I just read ur other open mic
and u have the potential to elevate
if u be original or at least rap about
what u know

i dont even know where to start, you need work every where, instead of tring to be a gangster and looking stupid rapping about shit you dont know and will never do, rap about something you know, or the way you feel, your a 14 year old doing ganster rap it just dont work.