The rain pours down his neck as he hangs his head low
The murky tombstone peers and stands beyond the hedge row
its then that he fights she was the one that everybody likes
With “devoted mother” lit up upon the cemetery lights
Now as a tear adds to the rain he try’s to reminisce
All from his mother’s comfort and her tender kiss
To amend the shit that brought her to a tragic death
He was there as she died and watched her static breath
Erratic… yes he watched her die before himself
he tried to endure the frail, and now it all is hell
Bitter irony being his most hurt day was his birthday
She was making peace with his father in the worst way
She only popped out to meet him to make amends
But that was last time he saw her... as fate portends
And still he blames his father to this very day of pain
“dad you fuck” as he curses to him in every way of strain
*a dark figure approaches the boy*
*he speaks*
“please pray again, I’m sure it wasn’t all his fault
all this deceitful hate only insures the unsought”
“what would you know? Just leave me alone,
nothing is worse than this, for you its easy to moan”
“Let me tell you a story, and it hurts to tell
I was meeting this woman and what’s worse as well…
She was only my wife months before we tried to make up
But my mind stayed stuck, as her life waged up
She was only blocks before another car ended the scene
And with so much pain I couldn’t pretend that I’d seen…
Her die straight before me, so my life i took moments after
And I only came back today cuz hell roamed with laughter
And what even hurts…”
“so your saying you’re ghost”?
“let me proceed its worse, I had the best surprise…
for my son on his birthday… but now I’ll rest my eyes”
“Progress and rise, even tho I feel I don’t want to hear
But now after everything I’m not one to fear”
“ok…I can’t” as the tattered man bursts in to tears
but he ends the story now as the mergin appears
"I only wanted to say sorry, but when askin her eyes
I then saw you son… on the passenger side"

whaaaaaa?

damn that was raw.... long but it kpet me interested.. nice nice nice...

thanx

werd kids don't realise i am the shit

For that statement, I will not read this.

for that statement, i will now realise you're a retard

and to scroll down its obvious you have read it anyhow...or some of it, and was still shoked tremendously realising i am 1000000000000000000000000000 X better than you



pz

Booby is a pretty smart kid haha.......

Peace Out!!

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lol i was only playing...but still..

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checkizzit

ill piece man.Dat wuz definitely a different kind of story but i liked it neway.Decent flow,confusin @ times.Stay ^
-Avi

you not follow the story?

anyone get the twist?

no?