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Old 04-09-03, 04:06 PM   #1
Freestylemyrhyme
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This game isnt always for you boys...

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Not only for boys...

This rap game aint always bout them boys
stand up on stage makin all the fuckin noise
they always be playin wit dem mics like they were there own toys

I'd like to make a statement
just cuz i'm a girl doesnt mean i aint gonna make it
if you give me shit, ima gonna take it cuz i'm not gonna sit back and get wasted...

Just cuz i aint got no dick
doesnt mean i cant make my rhymes sick cuz i rap so smothly they call me slick...next week just a take a lil look at da MTV screen and u be starin at my pic

So dont tell me i cant be rappin
Cuz after i'm done no ur not gonna be laughin, ur gonna be adoring me wish u were just like the one and only

Just show me the same respect
cuz i'll be yo homie and i'll have yo back
it dont matter to me if u a guy girl or black
cuz i will rap
till the day i die
so step aside cuz ima bout to take u for a ride...


just workin on it...might change a little...
tru 4 life
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Old 04-09-03, 04:10 PM   #2
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i'll up this piece. you may need to elevate vocab, but i enjoyed it. simple. keep spittin. peep mine. i got about a million of em, in open mike, front lines and poetical scriptures. look for roux.
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Old 04-09-03, 04:15 PM   #3
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thank you. Just started bout 3 days ago. Keep a look out for me..i've seen ur shit...u keep it up homie...u got good shit. payce
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Old 04-09-03, 05:35 PM   #4
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yea wasnt bad like u said tho it dont matter if u man or woman. this flowed nicely but u gotta spice it up throw in sum multies use sum word play and shit. ya vocab was aight but like i said its ya flow that was the nicest in this piece.
anyway return the favour check mine bangkok business
aight peace
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Old 04-09-03, 05:48 PM   #5
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Flowed nicely but i feel you need to elevate a lil bit
But was good shit And a good subject

"Just show me the same respect
cuz i'll be yo homie and i'll have yo back
it dont matter to me if u a guy girl or black
cuz i will rap
till the day i die"

True....
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Old 04-09-03, 08:13 PM   #6
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thank you all... i'm still workin on some others...kmfrob i've seen ur shit...nice vocab...a lil slow..but i like it...i'll reply after...payce homies
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