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This game isnt always for you boys...
IP: C779 902B
Not only for boys...
This rap game aint always bout them boys stand up on stage makin all the fuckin noise they always be playin wit dem mics like they were there own toys I'd like to make a statement just cuz i'm a girl doesnt mean i aint gonna make it if you give me shit, ima gonna take it cuz i'm not gonna sit back and get wasted... Just cuz i aint got no dick doesnt mean i cant make my rhymes sick cuz i rap so smothly they call me slick...next week just a take a lil look at da MTV screen and u be starin at my pic So dont tell me i cant be rappin Cuz after i'm done no ur not gonna be laughin, ur gonna be adoring me wish u were just like the one and only Just show me the same respect cuz i'll be yo homie and i'll have yo back it dont matter to me if u a guy girl or black cuz i will rap till the day i die so step aside cuz ima bout to take u for a ride... just workin on it...might change a little... tru 4 life |
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IP: FF61 8834
i'll up this piece. you may need to elevate vocab, but i enjoyed it. simple. keep spittin. peep mine. i got about a million of em, in open mike, front lines and poetical scriptures. look for roux.
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IP: C779 902B
thank you. Just started bout 3 days ago. Keep a look out for me..i've seen ur shit...u keep it up homie...u got good shit. payce
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
yea wasnt bad like u said tho it dont matter if u man or woman. this flowed nicely but u gotta spice it up throw in sum multies use sum word play and shit. ya vocab was aight but like i said its ya flow that was the nicest in this piece.
anyway return the favour check mine bangkok business aight peace |
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IP: 9B91 D0C6
Flowed nicely but i feel you need to elevate a lil bit
But was good shit And a good subject "Just show me the same respect cuz i'll be yo homie and i'll have yo back it dont matter to me if u a guy girl or black cuz i will rap till the day i die" True.... |
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IP: C779 902B
thank you all... i'm still workin on some others...kmfrob i've seen ur shit...nice vocab...a lil slow..but i like it...i'll reply after...payce homies
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